amateurFiction
This author does a great job painting a vivid picture of the main character’s world right from the start. This young werewolf has to face a tough world and it’s going to be a rough ride. This story is really well written and the author does a fantastic job telling an fascinating tale. A definite page turner! [img=recommend]
Okay. General Summary: The wolf-girl, Luna, is banished and must find a way to survive. The writing quality is actually well done, albeit a few comma misplacements and grammar mistakes. This story is enjoyable. The execution is well done. However, one thing that could be done better is the setting description/world-building. I also liked how you set up the wolf system. Other than that, I got invested in this story. Thanks for showing me this, @*******Fiction. Sincerely, CodeW
Spot on, this is how you do a werewolf novel. The biggest achievemet this novel has gained is that it builds heavily on the world of werewolves in this story via terms, powers and packs/clans. This novel shows you don't necessarily need a heavy set of worldbuilding in order to establish your setting. The author does a fantastic job at showing the world via characters. There's also a good balance at the possible romance between Dawn and some of the characters (or other major characters toward each other). The romance here has a build up, and it's still ongoing up until the end. I'm very happy that the romance does not overlook the werewolf elements. Most "werewolf" books I've seen my friends IRL read often have the romance dominate the fantasy elements. But not this novel, this novel avoids all those mistakes. If you're a fan of fantasy romance, werewolves in particular, then this book is for you. To any potential fantasy romance authors out there, let this book be a great example for all of you.
Although I'm not a fan of werewolf fiction, this story drew me in at the very first chapter. I couldn't understand why her Alpha would banish her for something so small. It makes you wonder why; if the reason is more than we're told. I love the way the writer uses her words, it's captivating and it draws you in. Nice work.❤👌