A new author, aspiring to create fun, interesting, and depressing stories, all based in the same universe, with a continuous story! None of your favorites are safe in my killing game stories!
Very interesting so far! The cast seems to be really realistic and down to earth, and the plot from the first few chapters is pretty well setup and interesting! Great work on the part of the author.
Really nice synopsis, character introductions, and writing style. I'm not finished reading, but from what I've read, it seems like a really interesting and well constructed story!
From the interesting synopsis, the unique writing style, and the characters being introduced and written differently from each other, this novel has some really good setup in the first few chapters! I can't wait to continue reading!
The descriptions, writing style, and start of the book was really well written, and besides the long length of the chapters, the novel seems pretty good so far! Can't wait to continue reading
Just from the first few chapters, the story sets up the main duo's dynamic, the mystery, and the horror elements pretty perfectly! Besides a few typos and grammatical errors, the story is really good and interesting so far! Can't wait to keep reading.
Just from the first two chapters the story has set up the characters and interesting turns of events that don't usually happen in stories. Really looking forward to reading more!
Very interesting read so far! The characters and central ideas of the elements are all well established, and the storytelling with dungeons and plot points keeps me constantly intrigued! Really incredible so far!
Really nicely written story! The updates are frequent, the characters are really well established and written, and the plot caught me in the first few chapters! Can't wait to see where this goes!
From the first few chapters, I really like this story so far! The characters are written masterfully, the lines used to split up the different parts is interesting! I can't wait to read more, and I'm exciting to see what's gonna happen next!
Really well written story, can't wait to see where it goes next! The characters are well constructed, the words used to describe things are always perfect, and the plot is insanely captivating!
Talented writing style, interesting main character and supporting cast, and a really good story so far! Can't wait to read more from this author!
Really interesting read so far. The characters and the issues with the relationships are written masterfully, and really gives the story a realistic feel to it, which I really enjoy! Keep up the good work author!
The story and characters are really nice, and pretty well written, besides a small abundance of grammatical issues. It's excusable though, since I assume it is not a born English author writing this. The world building sometimes falls into the background, and I wish the story took some times to actually develop things and let the story slow down a bit, but if that was added into later chapters, this will be a really nice read!
Really well told story! The characters and the way they transfer from perspectives is really natural, and the storytelling is nearly flawless so far! I can't say much about the story yet, but I'm excited to see where it goes!