Review Detail of CodeW in Darkest Before the Dawn

Okay. General Summary: The wolf-girl, Luna, is banished and must find a way to survive. The writing quality is actually well done, albeit a few comma misplacements and grammar mistakes. This story is enjoyable. The execution is well done. However, one thing that could be done better is the setting description/world-building. I also liked how you set up the wolf system. Other than that, I got invested in this story. Thanks for showing me this, @*******Fiction. Sincerely, CodeW