Roonman
The details are just soo perfect in this book! I’m only 4 chapters in and can see how brilliantly imaginative the author is. The effort put in every expressions made by the character to the buildup tention! I feel like there will be some creative arc in the story Soo im looking forward to it author!
Speechless! I like a wide range of books but especially those that engages my emotions and let me become a part of them from start to finish. I love you writing style and the way you describe aspects of the story I was able to follow the storyline and even they to guess what might happened ahead of actually reading it. What actually happened I never expected as in a situation like that persons are definitely not calm. But I was able to identify with Sean but also understand Joseph. "When you give you all to someone for love and leave nothing for yourself. That is a crime, because when what is given is taken granted repeated till it looses it value, that is a pain far worse than one might imagine as it's a break and destruction of self." ~Bianca. Front the above quote I could understand Joseph's viewpoint. Great book.
I've always loved a story from the first person POV... and this has been a good read. I acknowledge you author, for winning my heart and failing to return it... I was planning on giving a constructive criticism but now I'm speechless.. HOW COULD YOU BE SOOOO GOOOODDD!!!😭😭😭😭... Well, good job after all... Note: You could cut down the paragraph length... Not really necessary but then I mustn't go without giving at least one criticism 😜
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