I am a massive fiction enthusiast and geek. I recently discovered my talent and passion for writing and haven't stopped since.
Very interesting to be sure. Writing quality is very good and the style is very appealing for you TTRPG players. Keep it up author, and I cannot wait to finish this story.
This puts you right in the action; the way I like it. Still could have given some backstory before we got to the crazy betrayal stuff, but overall, this is pretty solid.
And so begins the path of Vengeance
Et tu, Brute? anyone?
Seventh?! This man's a tank!
Well...that's one way to start off a story, I guess.
This is a very mysterious story right from the get go and you're tempted to keep reading. Very well done and can't wait to finish this and see where it goes!
In my opinion, I think it would suck to get reincarnated as a goblin, but at least everything turned out ok for this guy. Writing is pretty solid, so keep it up
Pretty solid. The storyline and the character's abilities are super creative and original and that can really make a story stand out. Good work!
Pretty solid stuff overall. The writer's way of describing the world and characters is probably the best part, and that can really bring a story to life. Keep up the good work!
Really solid story overall. The way the mc is shown based on his backstory is really spot on and I admire the author's job of character development.
It's a very suspenseful story to be sure, leaving you wanting to read on. A few typos with punctuation here and there, but nothing too noticeable. Keep it up!
This is actually a pretty interesting story. I love the perspective of the narrator most; he just seems so relatable. Keep up the good work, author!
I am a HUGE fan of sci-fi novels, and this one does NOT disappoint. I love the setting and I think the author does a good job describing everything that happens. Keep it up!
For those of you who are familiar with the Big Hero 6 series, this takes place after the "City of Monsters" episode
What struck me the most about the story was how accurate to the real world the author made this. Some parts were a bit extreme, but overall, this is a pretty solid story. Nice work!
This little bit is an opening speech by Optimus Prime,
Some of you may recognize this girl as the upgraded form of Sari from the Transformers: Animated series. While this is indeed her, the Transformers in the story are still G1 design
I've always been a sucker for the good vs evil stories, and this one certainly didn't disappoint. Writing quality is pretty good, and I totally recommend this