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Stantheman1321yrReplied to SanchoPanzaSauce?
His girlfriend looked at him oddly with a smirk, "That sounded sus."- Stantheman1321yrReplied to boom_boom_8806
Just read the manga for So I'm a spider so what
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jazz lmao
Mental Defense: 1,121 - Stantheman1322yrCommented
how do u make text bold and italics on webnovel? please tell me, i need to know lmao
'If fire magic is converting mana into heat, then water magic is nothing but converting mana into cold, condensing the water in the atmosphere and turning it into the liquid state. It's all so obvious, it's like the damned Columbus' egg!' He thought. - Stantheman1322yrCommented
oh that head bruh
While he massaged her breasts, Su Yang's head approached the lower-half of her body. When Lan Liqing noticed that, she began to panic. - Stantheman1322yrReplied to Black_Jesus_0229
some might even say that penguinz are swimming in it right now
The door closed, leaving Li Xiao Mo alone, dumbfounded, and wet. - Stantheman1322yrPosted
The concept of this novel is great. However, there are a few flaws. First off, the character of Anya has a few moments of immaturity that don't really fit the vibe she gave off at first. Second, the grammar, while readable, does contain a few small mistakes that need to be corrected in each chapter. That should be fixed. Overall a very good start though
This book has been deleted. - Stantheman1322yrPosted
(says chapter 2, i read all 5 chapters on my phone but am writing on my computer) My only problem with this is that it's too short right now :\ i love this novel so far, it's a really nice read so far and the double main characters/pov makes it even better and even more interesting. I have no problems with the grammar as well, the writing flows fairly nicely. Can't wait to see how this story is fleshed out, and to read further interactions between our 2 protagonists
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(It says chapter 3 because o read up to chapter 3 on my phone but on my computer read to chapter 10) This is a pretty good novel to say the least. The concept of the time protectors agency is great and it seems like a lot of thought has been put into this. My only main problem is the grammar. I gave it 3 stars for the writing quality because despite being mostly readable, the grammar can make it difficult to read at times. However, this does have a lot of potential and i cant wait to see how this novel fleshes out!
- Stantheman1322yrPosted
This story seems pretty good so far, but has a few significant issues that hold it back from being very good, if not great. The first major problem is the writing. The grammar is not the best, which could possibly cause readers to be turned off from reading this novel. The second issue i have with it is that it seems kind of surface level with the characters. A bit more depth put into the characters would make this story so much better. Good job so far, author, but it needs a bit of work. It says chapter 3 but thats because i only read up to chapter 3 on my computer, i read up to chapter 9 on my phone but am writing this review on my computer
- Stantheman1322yrPosted
Hey guys, shameless author here writing a review for his own novel. While the main characters goal is to climb the heavens claws, the story will most likely take a while before we even reach the first one. However, I will definitely try and make it worth the wait :) If this story seems interesting to you, then please read it. I am personally very excited to write this novel, and having readers be there with Ray along his journey would make the story even better.
- Stantheman1322yrCommented
Dont cultivate with the head of the epstein family, worst mistake of my life
"Once my great grandfather, and the ancestor of our family, was given a cultivation method by a weird man along with the ancestors of the other large families in New York: The Lin Family, The Ford Family, The Dale Family and The Epstein Family. - Stantheman1322yrCommented
Ha ha he did a funny
"So that means while others cultivate, I LVL UP in my sleep using the dungeon system" he mumbled. - Stantheman1322yrCommented
BLASPHEMY
In less than twenty minutes he had arrived and paid the driver 40 dollars which was more than double what he needed to pay. - Stantheman1322yrCommented
Ah yes, the MC is also a new yorker, i approve
It was now 10 am and the streets of Brooklyn were bustling and full of people, while Adam weaved through the crowds receiving dirty looks due to his ripped and smelly clothing.