Review Detail of Anony_Mous_1902 in Before Dawn (TCC)

I've always loved a story from the first person POV... and this has been a good read. I acknowledge you author, for winning my heart and failing to return it... I was planning on giving a constructive criticism but now I'm speechless.. HOW COULD YOU BE SOOOO GOOOODDD!!!😭😭😭😭... Well, good job after all... Note: You could cut down the paragraph length... Not really necessary but then I mustn't go without giving at least one criticism 😜