Follower_of_Abadom
so I really enjoyed this story, the author does a really good job of building up the world and the game in general through I do think the tutorial section was a little bit rushed and would have been better if the actions of the character were told less and shown more. I really like where the story seems to be going and have high hopes for the future of this novel. I also would recommend the rest of the author's books as well as those are also top quality books.
It's a really great story that elevates the genre of a system in real-life and the VR game to a higher level. The only bad thing about the story is that the MC doesn't have any supporting cast yet, so it's a bit boring to read the MC's thoughts and actions, there needs to be a little romance or comradery with others. But the story is still new so it might come up in future chapters.
You would think that I defaulted to 5 stars but I actually tried to nitpick it. I love the character the most I think, his personality is well written and I just can't get enough of him. The writing quality is top notch, I think I spotted a few minor mistakes but nothing to complain about. The story development speaks for itself. Update stability is solid, my only wish is that there where more chapters. Finally the world background is astoundingly well done, most don't bother going as in depth on the world background early on, others tend to info dump towards the middle of the story when it suddenly becomes relevant so I'm considerably impressed. My overall thoughts are that I can't wait for more and keep up the good work, it's been a while since I found a story this well written.
Just read the entire thing in one go. This novel is amazing and deserves a place in my favorite reads. Really, I got addicted to reading this and now I'm sad I caught up. I love the fact that the MC behaves like an NPC, I'd liked to see more novels like this. Overall, I really recommend this novel. I'm surprised I didn't read this earlier. Anyway, I'd like to see more of your work dear Author, keep up the good work.
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Really have enjoyed it so far overall its really good my only concerns are the quality of the romance because I have read this other author that does romance really well and now its hard to read any other story with subpar romance. Anyhow one last thing not including flash backs the past nearly 100 chapters have taken place in almost 1 REAL LIFE DAY. You don't need to but for my sanity I would appreciate it if you spread out the story canonically a little bit like keep the story the same pace just make the says pace faster. Still really good though.