Now something nice the character (Irene) was made very well and a lot of different things happen to make her do that i can't physically type all the different gripes but that character reminds me of a certain one from the tower of gods story. very well done and just me ranting and sharing how great of a job you are doing. We both see this story differently and i see it as not all stories have a good ending

Firstly i have an immense hatred for Irene she betrayed him repeatedly and used/ manipulated him wheter it was the purpose or not. Such as when he would say i would fight the gods for you and she took that as a lie only for him to literally fight the gods for them and to get betrayed, he never once lied or betrayed any of them yet they repeadtly did that to him.

I will start my comment with a love the work you are doing and everything and I see we see the world in a different way as well as the reply on this comment from me will be overall with blunt language just a mini preface as i actually really enjoy this story and don't particularly wish for anything to be different.

Awesome 😀.

This chapter made me reread some of the older chapters, and just an odd thought. Was whether some of the people from his second life (previous one as a researcher) like will any of the tech or people from that world try to go to this one. For some reason when the blip with his soul no longer in his body made me think about his previous life for some reason. Sorta wanna know but also sorta don't wanna.

this dude is definitely hitting on the alchemist i just have that feeling

I most definitely have so far.

wow i wonder how this review got here. personally haven't read it yet but the authors work is very good and saw the concept behind this story. give it a shot.

By characters i meant like i had to type more words so i can post the review. sorry if seems like i said more people need to be in the story.

Great story so far. All I can say is keep it up. The mission world's so far are absolutely great. A few more characters needed so i can post the review.

overall this is a great story and glad I found it when I did. highly unique and the background doesn't feel fake. The sage is really well done and the "tramatic" moment was great.

i remember the first time the author did this. it was similar a very innocent cliff hanger. Then it went downhill. i hope this is the redeeming arc for cliff hangers.

my favorite part is here

anyone remember what the author said about them knowing better with cliff hangers.

Ooooh. If we are talking about a third pokemon probably one of the ones that doesn't make sense to get without knowing the game for example one of the traded Pokemon, or one of the pokemon that need special items. Like Scizor, Steelix, Slowking, Bellossom, or any of them. Would be cool if he has another pokemon none of them know about, (only really know the earlier gens so that's why I recommended those ones ,but any really can work.) Though the dude will probably need a flying type as his next. (Shedninja will also be hilarious)

Oooh, that is a pretty good Clif hanger my friend. I hope you don't get to burnt out and if you got to take a bit longer to return that is a okay. just don't give up on it if possible.

When you code games just treat everything like either an if statement or a case statement. IE one option or multiple choice. those little graphs that you see in like movie timeline will help.

semi don't want to be that guy but author please come back cause I really do like what you have been doing in these stories. it doesn't even have to be the same story just your writing was always a really great read.

Thanks for the chapter

YES. I have missed your writing. Also the new graphic is interesting I was scrolling through and almost missed your update. so glad I didn't. don't know what but the way you portray this world and characters always brings me back.