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WickedQueen2

WickedQueen2

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I enjoy reading and writing. I'm also at uni learning game development specifically the writing aspect.I miss Nox everyday.

2017-12-06 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen21mth
    Commented

    I know it really doesn't matter but Artorias fought the abyss when it first appeared in Oolacile which became Farron and they used to travel from land to land fighting against the abyss until they themselves were affected.

    So, after thinking about it for a bit, he ultimately made his decision to fight one of the Lords of Cinder: the Abyss Watchers. They were not one person but a group of knights who fought against a mysterious and powerful force of the abyss—an evil force from the place called Farron. They were inspired by the legendary wolf knight, Artorias, who fought against the abyss's influence attacking Farron. They took inspiration from him.
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    Shadow slave: Dark souls system
    Anime & Comics · Otaku_Gamer_00007
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen28mth
    Posted

    I will preface this with saying, I want to give this a lower rating, I can't sadly because it's only one aspect that I dislike though it's arguably the most important. I am on chapter 35 now, I don't think I'll be continuing sadly because of a single thing. the MC has revealed meta knowledge, only marginally at this point but it's enough. I'll admit I mostly just hate Danzo and the root and it's clear they're gonna be important continuing forward so I'll be leaving early.Regardless of my distaste for Danzo I have an even bigger issue with the system and the far too many critical downsides.First, it takes too long between simulations, I can sort of understand this one but it's still annoying.Second and likely my biggest issue with this system, the system is limiting him in such a way that he can't use it for anything but getting simulation points as he needs them to get his natural capabilities back, most significantly with his learning abilities being hindered immensely.if everything else wasn't better by such a significant margin this story would have run into the ground on the disappointment of a system long ago.if I do come back to this and i find it better than I expected it to become i will update this review but so far i am disappointed.

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    Naruto: A Broken Dream
    Anime & Comics · DesMark
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen211mth
    Commented

    Those are literally the games I've played recently and in the correct order as well, that's hilarious.

    As I asked that the wall ROB was staring at suddenly disappeared and a big wheel suddenly popped out of nowhere. The wheel had multiple colours with different names on it. It had exactly 10 colours with 10 names on them. Those were - Overlord, Highschool DxD, Naruto, One Piece, Elden Ring, Genshin Impact, Terraria, Skyrim, Marvel, DC.
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    Gamer in Overlord
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen21yr
    Commented

    it's a shame you've decided to stop, but I understand completely. Enjoy your break from writing and do something fun. I hope you return to this in the future as this is a great story with a lot of potential. Be proud and come back stronger!!!

    Ch 61 Sorry
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    Marvel : Eternal Blazing Sun
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen21yr
    Replied to K_VGAMERS

    Thanks for the feedback, I'm actually working on the next draft of the book now, sadly I won't be uploading it as in the past my work was stolen and sold on Amazon. Thank you for the support and I'll be sure to take what you've said into consideration while I continue working on it!!!

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    The Craftsman
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen21yr
    Replied to TheBoredMonkeyMonk

    half dwarf and half elf.

    Ch 14 Beginning of Magic
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    The Craftsman
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen21yr
    Commented

    Focus on yourself when you need/want, it's your life and your book, we're just the lucky ones who get to read what you write. on another note I've been enjoying the recent chapters a lot, keep up the good work!!!

    Ch 114 No Chapter Today
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    Magical Marvel (HP X MCU)
    Book&Literature · athass_prkr
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen21yr
    Posted

    You would think that I defaulted to 5 stars but I actually tried to nitpick it. I love the character the most I think, his personality is well written and I just can't get enough of him. The writing quality is top notch, I think I spotted a few minor mistakes but nothing to complain about. The story development speaks for itself. Update stability is solid, my only wish is that there where more chapters. Finally the world background is astoundingly well done, most don't bother going as in depth on the world background early on, others tend to info dump towards the middle of the story when it suddenly becomes relevant so I'm considerably impressed. My overall thoughts are that I can't wait for more and keep up the good work, it's been a while since I found a story this well written.

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    Azimuth: The Elden Throne (Old Version)
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen21yr
    Commented

    I've enjoyed this arc so far but it's your story and I can see what you mean, I found myself doing the same in my book towards the end glad you saw this in yours and decided to fix it. Your book, Your rules.

    Ch 199 Fuck it!
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    Frost's Greed (Marvel)
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen21yr
    Commented

    my cat is called Nox and now I can't help but imagine my cat being reincarnated, the MC has a similar personality so far

    "For my name, I'll go with Nox Lyros! Bit chunni but very Fantasy like!" Declared Nox. "Now for the starter stuff, show me the options!" He requested.
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    The Archon of Danmachi
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen22yr
    Commented

    funny cause that's the same as mine.

    What? You dirty minds! It's my date of birth OK? 6th of September. 6-9. Ok? sigh...I'm disappointed in you.(*adjusting my imaginary half moon spectacles*)
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    HP: I Have "Pure" Magic
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen22yr
    Replied to Literate_Wailmer

    yes it screeched an almighty "rrreeeeeeeeeeeee", as a sound attack if I remember the context correctly.

    The creature seeing Daedalus made a screeching noise, which made Daedalus quickly cover his ears, before it jumped at him. As the creature jumped at him, Daedalus kicked out towards it with his leg in a precise manner managing to hit it right in the neck, knocking the creature back, although it did almost manage to bite his foot as he kicked it away. The creature rather than being killed or knocked out flipped in a graceful manner through the air before landing on its hind legs shocking Daedalus slightly before he quickly regained his composure and got into a stance. His stance was with his left leg just behind his right and his left arm raised slightly higher than his right.
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    The Craftsman
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen22yr
    Replied to Literate_Wailmer

    I agree the author escalated it far too quickly, it's unfortunate, I feel this had a lot of potential to show off the crafting part of the story. Not gonna lie I definitely did escalate too quick, I hope as you read further it gets better, if not please berate my writing and offer feedback I really appreciate it thanks for reading!!!

    Ch 13 Conflict at the Festival
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    The Craftsman
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen22yr
    Commented

    R

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    The Epic of Leviathan
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen22yr
    Commented

    I don't feel like enough fanfics emphasise the Earn part of earn money enough. Would be cool in my opinion.

    I don't care if they want to remove fake heroes, as long as a hero saves people he is doing good. No matter for what reason he or she does that. Now, there are some Heroes who intentionally create some kind of problem so that they can solve it... Vanguard Action Squad should go after them... not like people like Ochako, who wants to be Hero to earn money.
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    The Epic of Leviathan
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen22yr
    Replied to Gargamel72

    thank you

    Ch 487 Announcement, Thank You!!!
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    The Craftsman
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen22yr
    Replied to BlackSwordman1234

    Maybe go back and add more chapters to show how those years passed, for example you could do it like a time lapse where you show key points rather than a time skip as it skips too many details. I find it fun to do that sort of thing, although you may need to re upload each chapter to get it in order so maybe do a flashback sort of time lapse, but rather than make it so he is having the flashback it is the flash or just us readers maybe put flash into a position where he is witnessing it like a movie. Sorry if this is long, I love this fanfic so I hope this has helped!!!

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    IGNORE THIS!@#
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen22yr
    Commented

    I know it is in poor taste to make the joke but... Madeye Moody in the making... I hope it wasn't too bad an accident and you get well soon. I love this story so I am glad you are still writing even while hurt.

    For those of you who are curious. I got into a accident, messed up my leg pretty bad and needed a metal one. Like I said earlier I am back home now doing well. Thankfully my beautiful fingers are fine, and I can type away all day long.
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    Wizard King
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen22yr
    Replied to Gargamel72

    when I'm not too busy on my final major project I will make a chapter, anything you want to see?

    Ch 486 it's been a while
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    The Craftsman
    Fantasy · WickedQueen2
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  • WickedQueen2
    WickedQueen23yr
    Replied to romilyxus

    I'm glad you enjoy my book. I don't actually use social media much if at all, I'm sorry if that disappoints you. When I start writing again I will see about setting up a discord, though it will be a while as I am focusing on my education right now.

    Ch 485 Little Merchant Ship
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    The Craftsman
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