Review Detail of JP7345 in Azimuth: The Elden Throne (Old Version)
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so I really enjoyed this story, the author does a really good job of building up the world and the game in general through I do think the tutorial section was a little bit rushed and would have been better if the actions of the character were told less and shown more. I really like where the story seems to be going and have high hopes for the future of this novel. I also would recommend the rest of the author's books as well as those are also top quality books.
Azimuth: The Elden Throne (Old Version)
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I plan to show more of the tutorial later, but I do understand where you are coming from, I just felt that it was necessary to skip the tutorial and go for the cool part, but I do understand that showing him doing some dungeons and Etc would've been better... Due to how I made these, It would be possible to add 2-3 chapters in the future