An angel‘s road to hell

Don’t take the rating too seriously, it’s my story after all. I mainly wanted to encourage you guys to leave any form of criticism or praise… otherwise it’s kinda hard to tell if you like my writing. I’m probably going to finish this story either way as I just want to try my hand at writing, but small hints are very much appreciated! So, if you find the time, please write a small review or comment within the story. Thanks a ton and enjoy!

This book needs a lot more attention. Frankly this is becoming of my favorites very fast. The writing quality is excellent beside common typos. The story seems to be well planned out and told in an engaging way which you will not want to stop. Characters are alive, develop and change at a great and realistic pace. Each character seems unique and slot into their roles well. The tone and journey of the characters feels realistic and fleshed out. It can be dark and sad, or slice of life to give a fuzzy moment. Well done on this author. Lastly the lore and world building is very very very interesting. It gives enough of an image to know what’s happening but not enough to feel like an info dump or take away the mystery of it all. The lore has great stories to give depth into each character and their actions though each encounter. 11/10 would recommend to anyone and everyone

I'm a simple man, I see fox girls, magic, good grammar good plot at least for now, albeit a bit dense sometimes to read, I like, me give stars.

Alright, first of all, a quick update on my plans: as of chap 155 the first arch is done. I thought about adding a few more chapters but truth be told, everything further down the road will belong to the next storyline. During the next week I’ll start publishing new chapters and I hope you’ll join me on the journey. Hopefully reading has been as much fun as writing and you’re going to stick around for the next round. Judging from the reviews and comments I’ve read thus far, thanks a ton by the way to everyone who took the time to provide some feedback, I’d say that I’m not completely off the mark. I took the last week to read through what I’ve written until now, and I have to admit, going through your own writing is quite challenging. There are some parts, especially in the beginning that are rather… bumpy. I don’t think it’s a huge problem but some scenes are just… a little off. Maybe I’ll take the time to rewrite them, but for now, I actually want to follow the story further. I guess it’s pretty obvious how it’s going to continue, with elves, fey and dragons waiting for a visit. So, to everyone who read until the end of the first arch, thank you, and to everyone who starts reading now, welcome to this world. And as always, if you liked or disliked any part, I’d be grateful for any form of feedback.

Incredibly good story that is easy to follow but still unpredictable and surprising. The character development is good and well rounded which contributes to a good background to the book. Minor spelling mistakes but nothing major. Highly recommend this book for people with a thrill for action and love combined.

This is great 5/5. It's well written and the characters are designed very well. The only criticism I have would be for the synopsis actually. I had actually glanced at this story a few time but the synopsis just didn't really interest me and so i passed over it. But after reading I'm overly in love with it and I can't wait for the next chapter! I do hope our girls get a small break or a relaxed training arc for a few days since it seems from her birthday to the most recent chapter is like 1 maybe 2 weeks? Man that's a rough couple of days lol

Ome thing I have to ask is will there yuri romance?

The only thing I want to ask is if it will only be Yuri, without any polyamory and that? .