Kogatsu
Learning all the forms? Then learning Sun Breathing from the other forms, what are you doing man. The timeline is also really confusing, nothing makes sense. The reason why Yoriichi Tsugikuni didn't teach the Demon Slayers his Sun Breathing was because it didn't suit them. Why waste all these chapters learning all the breaths? It's pointless. You take everything good about Demon Slayer and turn it into this. This is also basically canon with Urokodaki and the Hashira even though it's years earlier. The wishes are also dumb, why waste learning all the breaths and becoming a demon during the night that loses power closer to the day, you could have wished for being born with the Demon Slayer Mark and be a genius swordsman. And being able to transform into a demon. If I could I would give it zero stars.
Sometimes OP is good. The MC in this Fic is OP and can already defeat Muzan easily, yet he still gets ordered around by the other weaker demon slayers. Then his wish about being able to turn into a Demon suddenly disappeared all of a sudden. Pathetic excuse for not killing Muzan early. All in all it had a great idea but awful presentation.
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I don't know about other people but I liked this fanfic. And yes there are many things that are not much sensible or are just like mc is dumb or so. but it is still π― time better than though where mc with system or mc that just get op and have skills to brainwash woman to fall for him. this mc is op but the author still trying to control the power so the can be a novel to read. and thought who think that mc is op and don't use his powers to finish the last enemy faster are idiot. think if you go to a world with op power don't you think it will be fun to play with you enemy Rather than killing them once and for all. in the end I will say that author is doing good and please release some more chapter thanks for the novel.
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Muy buena historia aunque me gustaria que huniera mas limones o cosas para mayores +18. Si me entienden? [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]