Only read chapter 1 but it's a good LONG read. I'm 2 lazy to make a proper review but I highly recommend reading it if you prefer longer and above average quality FFs. I just hope it doesn't get dropped like many other genuinely good ffs. Great work and I'm looking forward to reading it

Congrats

Could literally have just killed Crocodile and this wouldn't be happening. He's the only one that knows, worse case scenario he is seen as a traitor and labeled as a pirate

It's a good FF, it's good to have u back

Basically he will get stronger once he fixes his mental issue and get his memories back. At least there is a solid reason why he acts the way he does And why he's weak, it's because he has a mental disorder that's literally blocking his growth. Love ur work author

I think he is immune or can see through genjutsu easily

Like I said, trust the author. Naruto was horrible when he was still a student until he found out his talents, I'm guessing the author will do the same thing.

I do agree on you somewhat, but I feel like it's the most realistic FF out there. Mc is horrible at EVERYTHING related to being a ninja because he came from our world. But it's normal that way because his literally still a child that has no powers or gifts he is just good at a few things like making clones. My advice is just to trust the author for now since Overall the FF is Good (besides the mc being weak), the updates are consistent, and its actually well written. Plus seeing how the authors other FF got 200 chapters this FF is going to be a slow progression. Also you should have guessed it by now that the mc will be weak when he's at his kid arc, chapter 1-20 has literally been him being horrendously weak

Basically read almost 3000 now and I agree w you, Only like 300 or less got my interest to actually read and the majority of them got dropped which is sad since it's all just garbage ffs now.

He could have killed him while he had the chance but he just ran off

Pretty sure it's not his FF, he just uploaded it here. Which brings another question, why r u asking for money when u didn't make this one?

Hinata

Currently not at all, it's the beginning of the FF so it should be a bit slow since we are still learning about the characters plus how you create the world. Just know that slow progression might make it boring for some people if the updates are also slow but ur FF is pretty good

If it's a continuation why? there's no point but making it more complicated

Finally, the long wait was worth it. One of the best character dept mha FF I've read In a while

Don't get upset, it's just the author likes to drag everything on, he will start winning in the next 10 chapters. At least it finally started

It's a good FF and all but I'll let it stock up, someone just tell me when the plan actually starts. It's been dragged for so long I forgot that he's a villain.

Don't know if the chapters are getting shorter or I'm just skimming through it now since it's been dragged out. Still a decent FF tho

yeah it's been dragged out 2 much , but at least updates are fast

He rewrote the FF, it used to be a One Piece powers in Naruto