Steals ideas and the work of Crownborne. Then he advertises it on Patreon. He's a scammer guys don't support this donut. He somehow made the MC dumber than Issai too, shouldn't be possible.

Glad that he didn't pick Devil and the boosted gear because then that would have limited him despite the boosted gear being able to double your level multiple times... Then doesn't choose an arcanist because he's afraid to be locked as a healer and picks a summoner? MC is officially dumber than Issei.

Okey, so far the story is tell not show. We know nothing of the mc's motives or his background, his history, nor do we know his mindset. All we know is that he got transmigrated and skipped the academy by training and challenging the 13th seat of the 11th division. He also has a Zanpakuto with the name Kanketsu that control's emotions? Kanketsu a Zanpakuto name that I have no idea what means.

What does Kanketsu mean?

You know Zanjutsu requires a sword? So how did he not use his Zanpakuto?

Nice chap, can we get Rosalie as a love interest? She has a history of abuse and hatred of the wolf's, is be interesting to see her reaction to his mother and the wolves.

Can you even drive a Porsche 911 in forks with all that snow? And it's pretty much surrounded by trees and mountains.

Keep it up!

No, that was Paula's excuse. She only slept with guys to make him jealous. Not sure if the chapter got deleted or edited, but one did, and I remember this point heavily since I wanted to bash my head against the screen.

No... that's called bad writing.

The light side is the closest thing to balance in the Star Wars universe. Star Wars is built on dystopia and corruption on a galactic scale. So to balance this out, the Jedi seek only the light side of the force. They do this by devoting themselves to the will of the Force. The Jedi forbid attachments and possession. But encourage unconditional love. Jedi are about honesty, compassion, mercy, and self-sacrifice. Unfortunately, the Sith use the Force for their gain. By using their will on the Force, this is inherently evil and corruptive. When they try to use the Force for their twisted ideals, they suffer the psychic consequence of an unnatural act. And the Force strikes back. Nothing is perfect in a galaxy like Star Wars.

Jedi feel emotions. They are even encouraged to love. They are discouraged from forming attachments, though.

speak for yourself

I didn't even have a problem with Paula besides being a "gender-bent Paul...". Btw you made her out to be some sort of a loose woman. You made it out to be like she slept with a lot of guys, then just two.

I also had mine and didn't feel anything, I went karting right after, my brother was sick for two days though.

This chapter was a filler, him talking about his life as a gangster and a nurse patting his head. Already forgot about what was in this chapter. If the advanced chapters are anything like this one...

It's an mc that's an ant that talks like an alian. What's not to like here? YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET

Learning all the forms? Then learning Sun Breathing from the other forms, what are you doing man. The timeline is also really confusing, nothing makes sense. The reason why Yoriichi Tsugikuni didn't teach the Demon Slayers his Sun Breathing was because it didn't suit them. Why waste all these chapters learning all the breaths? It's pointless. You take everything good about Demon Slayer and turn it into this. This is also basically canon with Urokodaki and the Hashira even though it's years earlier. The wishes are also dumb, why waste learning all the breaths and becoming a demon during the night that loses power closer to the day, you could have wished for being born with the Demon Slayer Mark and be a genius swordsman. And being able to transform into a demon. If I could I would give it zero stars.

Sasuke can deactivate his Rinne-Sharingan, but not the Rinnegan since it was given to him by Hagoromo.