Review Detail of zarike in Amalgamation of Races
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Learning all the forms? Then learning Sun Breathing from the other forms, what are you doing man. The timeline is also really confusing, nothing makes sense. The reason why Yoriichi Tsugikuni didn't teach the Demon Slayers his Sun Breathing was because it didn't suit them. Why waste all these chapters learning all the breaths? It's pointless. You take everything good about Demon Slayer and turn it into this. This is also basically canon with Urokodaki and the Hashira even though it's years earlier. The wishes are also dumb, why waste learning all the breaths and becoming a demon during the night that loses power closer to the day, you could have wished for being born with the Demon Slayer Mark and be a genius swordsman. And being able to transform into a demon. If I could I would give it zero stars.
Amalgamation of Races
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Plus if he is going to other world.... He is just wasting his time in demon slayer world.... Strongest character of this world can only destroy town .....so much useless techniques.... I feel like mc is mascoscist.... Like to suffer.... He could have gotten better wished....i guess auther-san is big fan demon slayer.. And biased ..pls stop it...
nah mate, the author isn't entitled to that excuse. When you write and publish something you should be ready for criticism or even just insults.
zen_zoldyuck:the make your owon fanfic you dont how difficult it is
True. Customers in restaurants don't need to be chefs in order to criticize the food they were given. People watching movies don't need to be directors and actors in order to criticize the movie.
Pure_R18_Terror:nah mate, the author isn't entitled to that excuse. When you write and publish something you should be ready for criticism or even just insults.