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The_Grindelwald5mthCommentedGood first chapter but I really don't like the MC's looks, I hope it won't be mentioned to much so I can have an anothe mental image for the MC.
This book has been deleted.- The_Grindelwald7mthReplied to Claudio_69
He is low on both. Yeah no, it's not like he's low on both but lack them entirely
"Because you're smart," Hermione deadpanned. - The_Grindelwald7mthReplied to DaoOfCulture
It's far beyond even that
"S-So you don't mind this position?" Hermione asked. She sounded nervous. I couldn't guess why. - The_Grindelwald7mthCommented
This author has no idea how 1st POV works
I didn't see the little bite Hermione gave her lower lip either. But I certainly felt what she did next. She practically molded herself to my side, getting close enough that I could feel her heartbeat speed up. Still, I didn't look up from my book and she soon joined me, basically reading over my shoulder. - The_Grindelwald7mthCommented
If the MC don't see the glances then don't state it since it's a 1st POV story...
"That's it?" Hermione muttered to herself in surprise. I didn't see the glances she exchanged with Heather and the youngest Weasley, or the one she sent Ron's way only to see him literally drooling and trying to throw himself over the edge of the Top Box. - The_Grindelwald7mthReplied to AbsoluteAverage
I would, He is aware of animagus and literally said the dog seemed "human". In fact not using it just shows how utterly stupid he is...
His continued animosity toward me didn't seem to matter much. Heather and Hermione seemed convinced and he was outvoted, if his opinion even had any weight in the first place… I thought it was a bit weird to have your dog's name as a codeword but shrugged that thought off. If it worked, it worked. Not like I actually intended any harm to Heather or her friends. I made a note to suggest a better system for recognition to Heather in the future though. - The_Grindelwald7mthReplied to Hanni_Baal
She just became 16
Even with her ahead of me on the stairs, I had to look down slightly to meet her eyes. The Girl-Who-Lived was surprisingly short, maybe 5'1" at most. But that didn't mean she wasn't blessed in other ways. Her short frame was curvier than it had any right to be, with bountiful breasts, a tiny waist, and wide hips. - The_Grindelwald7mthReplied to TheWeebPrince
She's barely 16
Heather glanced back at me curiously, having heard the commotion I made to get behind her. Bright, emerald-green eyes locked with mine as if she was looking into my soul. Round, wireframe glasses rested atop an adorable button nose, framing her eyes in a way that did nothing to distract from their brilliance. Straight black hair was tied up in a casual, messy ponytail, giving Heather an effortlessly beautiful vibe as if she'd just rolled out of bed looking this good. - The_Grindelwald7mthCommented
How dumb you have to be to be completely broke with near reality warping powers...
"I am, quite literally, broke, Albus," I stated bluntly. "Penniless. My last Sickle was spent sending you my previous letter. If you had not responded to my request as you did, I would have been homeless by the end of the week. The current job market is not kind to Muggle-borns." - The_Grindelwald7mthReplied to Crimson_Carnage
It's Saitama moment you uncultured mongrel
< Condition(s): Do 100 Push-Ups, 100 Sit-Ups, 100 Squats, and Run 10 Kilometers in One Day > - The_Grindelwald7mthReplied to Winter_Metor
This one is a competent wizard who can't even feed himself... He doesn't looks bright either
According to the Prophet, the story went something like this… A young man, not even out of Hogwarts' age range yet, with seemingly no background stormed into Gringotts. To a crowd of witnesses, Wizard and Goblin alike, he declared himself heir to Merlin and the Founders. - The_Grindelwald7mthReplied to Ouroboros_Outings
I can't answer you, I don't even remember this fanfic
It was around this time that the second tentacle finally reached me. However I was ready for it and quickly made a Tempest arrow, witch appeared as violent winds that swirled around in the shape of an arrow. Once I was done I fired it right at the tentacle. - The_Grindelwald8mthReplied to GoldEmperor
Vinland Saga is such a masterpiece
How could he not hate me after all I've done?! - The_Grindelwald8mthCommented
How Adam looks like again?
"And... good looking... how unfair..." - The_Grindelwald8mthCommented
Almost forgot I was reading a gamer fic...
[ The Gamer's words have resonated with Sasuke Uchiha ] - The_Grindelwald8mthCommented
The author isn't even aware that his MC doesn't wear his canon clothes
Sasuke's dark eyes flicked towards the item in question. The jacket was a garish mix of bright orange and blue - a sight that was almost as painful to look at as it was wearing it. "No," he refused flatly, his expression deadpan. - The_Grindelwald8mthCommentedThe day seemed to be getting better by the second, and so far, nothing could ruin it!