Arkbrave
The dial is put to a 100 and doesn't go down for a moment! Lots of action, lots of things going on. The world lore is interesting and not too difficult to grasp. The only downside is that with so many things happening the actual event taking place get muddled in all the witty back anf forths between the character. A good story! Keep going!
I think it's well-written and some of the low reviews entirely based themselves on grammar issues and such, which were actually not that present. This is the author's first book and the issues that I have seen will be improved through more writing and otherwise, the story is interesting and worth a read, the writing can use some improvement but I think the author already has good descriptive ability. Give it a read, everyone! Keep it up :)
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Overall: This is a very interesting novel to read. If you want to read a fantasy book full of thrills, look no further than this. Highly recommended. Style - The author is using third person narration style. We are able to experience the feelings and actions of the characters. Well executed. Updating - As a writer myself, I give kudos to the author. Wtiting is very hard. I'm giving the autho 5 in this aspect. Story - Well planned. Story line is the heart of any novel, and this novel did a good job on its story. It's about a guy who'll embark on a journey of assembling a team together ti find out the cause of the apocalypse. Hard to put down. Grammar - Excellent use of the grammar. No complaint on this aspect. The flow of the story is smooth which shows the effort that the author is putting into the writing. Commendable. Character - The characters are well written and designed. They fitted their rolesl. Well written. The other characters are well catered for too. Kudos to the author. World: Its based on the fantasy genre settings. The author put great effort into this and it was perfect. Well done.
A great twist on a classic trope. I don't think I've ever seen a fantasy story that happens quite like this. The story plot line is completely different from what you see these days. The continuous action scenes which are very hard to handle, but yet seeing them written out so beautifully its endearing.Kudos to the author. Keep going!All the best!
The plot is interesting though these are a few points you could improve on. The setting/world background is very unclear. Is it a futuristic setting or ancient? You use technology and also horse riders which symbolises ancient times. If this novel is 800 years into the future then we should have amazing technology even with the chaos of the old world ending. The characters are not distinct and seem to have the same time and NO motivation. We also don't get a clear idea of who the MC is. Characters aren't well designed and the scene jumps are jarring. You should write scene by scene or use a scene break appropriately. You could use some proofreading before publishing to avoid grammar errors. Also, the plot doesn't satisfy the promise of relics. We don't see the rules of the magic system and it's shady. Good job nonetheless.