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LORDOFORIGINALINK1yrPostedSo before I delete this novel from my library purely because I do not want to see the cover again I wanted to tell you to delete that cover because it is horrible, atrocious, I mean if I saw that cover on my first time using Webnovel I would delete the app it looks like it’s made for children delete it
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Thanks I am new to writing after chapter everything improves and I wouldn’t mond u pointing out mistakes I have hand wrote everything I am Africa American so it’s not machine trans I already got an editor to edit my first 47 chapters besides 3&4 so they should be resolved and I have long since improved on my grammer and punc but if I missed something I would greatly acept a small chap commwnt that can help me improve this novel Thanks for the review
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"No evil shall be done henceforth. Can you do that?" Lu Zhou said word by word. - LORDOFORIGINALINK1yrCommented
Restart
He was able to enter with little fuss, beginning his new life in the Kingdom of Restari. - LORDOFORIGINALINK1yrReplied to EREBUS
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Spiritual Root TestdetailCultivation! My Augmented Statuses Have Unlimited DurationEastern · Turtle Shell and Hemp Rope - LORDOFORIGINALINK1yrCommented
I need some of that😏
"My head!"detailCultivation! My Augmented Statuses Have Unlimited DurationEastern · Turtle Shell and Hemp Rope - LORDOFORIGINALINK1yrPosted
Ight so this story is bad don’t waste your time everything is written like a funny parody without the funny the mc lived for five years saving money so he could activate the system but as soon as he activated it he instantly became a wasteful idiot. I had high hopes but all I received was endless cringe and dumb characters
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No
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I claim this back off! Feinds!
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He didn’ even enhance them
"According to the description of the secret magic, if I can summon six swords, I'll be able to step into late Foundation Establishment.... Although I cultivate the Violet Qi Heavenspan Incantation, because of the Undying Live Forever Technique, once I reach late Foundation Establishment, I can use the Blood Annihilation World along with it!" Bai Xiaochun was very pleased with how quickly had progressed from early Foundation Establishment to mid Foundation Establishment. Some of that was because of the medicinal pills the mysterious sect had given him, but another reason was the blood qi in the Blood Stream Sect. - LORDOFORIGINALINK1yrCommented
I thought it was at gold
He had managed to stand up to five of the clawed ghost hands, but it had been very difficult. Without his Undying Skin being at the silver level, he would surely have been defeated. - LORDOFORIGINALINK1yrReplied to KartikaD
- LORDOFORIGINALINK1yrReplied to OshbabyCh 78 True Hero - Slum Rat
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Good
Right in front of the Mayor, Jem noticed a nameplate. The nameplate bears the words Mayor Kahn Bei Silva. - LORDOFORIGINALINK1yrCommented[GSID: Soul Collector And Death Instigator aka The Trader]
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[Due to teachings from a light magic user, Users own contemplation of light magic has increased by 15% further training required to unlock element.] - LORDOFORIGINALINK1yrCommented
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And in the previous life, Xia Qingwan had made quite a name for herself. She was known as the Frost Fairy. In fact, she had helped Chu Feng a lot when he was seeking revenge.detailGlobal Survival: 100 Times Cultivation Speed From The StartSci-fi · Waiting For Compliments Online