Untolddead
Ah, such a beautiful story. Ahem. Sorry, got caught up with my worshipping. In any case, the writing quality is pretty good, thanks to the editor. There are still a few places in which grammer needs to be checked over though(but this is natural. Humans can't make everything perfect). Stability of Updates...hmm...for the most part, the updates are coming really well, just a few times couldn't meet the deadline(haha, better than good ol'sloth me) Everything else is just perfect! The way characters never appear the way they do, the growth of the children, and of course, our MC. It was hilarious reading the interaction of a plant and the demonic bull. XDXD I think the world background is great, and it actually sounds realistic, not just some bullcrud stuff being thrown at you. I find it is extremely easy to be hooked. I swear, it sounds just like those best-selling books. here I'm gonna boast my insignificant boast. I PUT IN THE 100TH POWERSTONE. SO PROUD OF MYSELF :D:D:D:D:D And that's about it. time to go back in my worship mode~
I truly love it. If there is word to define what I feel, I will say it's about freshness. This story reminds me about a RTW fanfiction about being reincarnated as rock and wielding magic, except this one actually have original framework so it has more materials to develop. The only concern that I have is the sentence structure, it might be some residual dialect of the author that makes me have some difficulties to get the nuance being implied. I also found some sentences/phrases that I believe can be shortened/rephrased and still retains its intent. The need of the editor is quite high for this work, nonetheless the story itself is amazing, it's a really great take on the way of plant's life. Do you know that, after reading this story, I did self reflection about our treatment over plant and animal... I will add this, you might add a chapter about cultivation jargon especially the power level, to clear some ideas
This novel is written and looks like a lot of other novels on royalroadls (dungeon kinds and re:smthing ) that are quickly dropped (yeah) The story is a bit too childish ( the thief , the rambling of the MCs and the villagers) and the characters are not well enough introduced (as of today I don't give a f*ck to any of them except the thief) The uploading pace is a bit low to nowadays novels It's stll good and would like to continue to read it as long as possible until you decide to drop it. 97/100 IGN
I wasn't going to do a review because it feels like cheating but all the others writers say they did it so here I am. I was surprised by how many people were interest in this strange story I came up with to join the competition. I didn't even get it out in time too enter so I had written it off. Yet now it's way more popular then Iron Will Reaches the Heaven which was the story I wanted to write most. This gives me mixed feeling but I'm glad people are enjoying this. I literally have no plan and am just making it up as I go for this one. Please stick with me on this unusual adventure!
A very interesting take on the reincarnation plot device. I found myself enjoying every chapter as there were many surprises on the way. The author brings up many interesting points and the look into what plant cultivation may be like is also very fresh and new. The story features many likeable characters, from Elanor to Laurel, from John to Joe. You'll find yourself smiling warmly at the antics of the 'hill friends'. The comedy is not laugh out loud funny, it may appeal to others more as everyone has a different sense of humour. However that does not mean I did not find it entertaining, I found myself finding many sentences quite humorous, I would say it was on the verge of making me giggle like a little school girl but not laughing out like a crazed hyena. Yet again, it may be different for others. For me, the comedy was not the strong point of this novel, but how interesting and creative it was, I found myself reading each chapter and becoming increasingly interested in the cultivation system and the world in general, some questions are answered and some are not, this makes a good balance of mysteriousness. The quality of writing is very decent, the only problem that the author suffers from is the lack of commas in some places, I read quite fast and I sometimes became confused for a second when a sentence changed topics. Other than this, everything else about the literacy quality is great and there are little to no problems to be found. In conclusion, this is a novel that I will constantly keep coming back to as long as the Author keeps on writing, unfortunately this novel is not getting the full attention it deserves as evidenced by the low number of comments on each chapter, but I feel that as long as the Author keeps this up, this may very well change. Which I hope it does as this story is quite entertaining. Rating: Writing Quality 4 Stability of Updates 4 Story Development 5 Character Design 5 World Background 4 Final Rating: 4.4