Ah, such a beautiful story. Ahem. Sorry, got caught up with my worshipping. In any case, the writing quality is pretty good, thanks to the editor. There are still a few places in which grammer needs to be checked over though(but this is natural. Humans can't make everything perfect). Stability of Updates...hmm...for the most part, the updates are coming really well, just a few times couldn't meet the deadline(haha, better than good ol'sloth me) Everything else is just perfect! The way characters never appear the way they do, the growth of the children, and of course, our MC. It was hilarious reading the interaction of a plant and the demonic bull. XDXD I think the world background is great, and it actually sounds realistic, not just some bullcrud stuff being thrown at you. I find it is extremely easy to be hooked. I swear, it sounds just like those best-selling books. here I'm gonna boast my insignificant boast. I PUT IN THE 100TH POWERSTONE. SO PROUD OF MYSELF :D:D:D:D:D And that's about it. time to go back in my worship mode~
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LIKEUntolddead:Thanks, I feel a bit overwhelmed by the high praise here. I don't know what to say. It put a smile on my face though. I hope you enjoy the story just as much in the future.
Untolddead:Also Loeri only edited the first chapter. I've just gotten better at writing... I hope. I have no editors currently.