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Although this piece has only 5 chapters at the moment of me writing this, I felt it deserved a review so more people can appreciate this work. First and foremost, the writing quality is very high. I find very few writing errors at all, and the ones I find are nearly imperceptible. The story development is pretty good so far. Some parts feel a little forced like how he was born, but it's still very easy to follow along and flows quite well. From what I've seen about the character design so far is exciting. The main character seems to have some hidden attribute that might be attracting yanderes. Not much to say about the updating stability as this is a pretty new story with minimal chapters. I can only hope that in the future there is a schedule! Chapter 5 has given a descriptive look at the new world. Overall I'm very excited to see where this story goes. And as always, praise the yandere.
Your Author here to give a totally honest and shameless review, I think I rated it somewhat fairly, but it's impossible to not be biased at all. To give a short summary, it's a book about a reincarnator who goes through your classic web novel worlds (not fanfic), from isekai to cultivation, and maybe a few others, the twist, however, is that our protagonist has a special talent, no matter how many times he reincarnated he just seemed to get attention from women, specifically yandere's, when a female lays eyes on him or gets a whiff of his scent, it all goes downhill. The first volume will be about your average fantasy world, with different races, magic, and an academy, I want to take my time with the book, so don't come here expecting cultivation and face slapping right away, it will take a while. Besides all that, I hope if you do decide to read my first work, you can leave your honest opinions here and enjoy the novel.
My First Review so donโt be to harsh Writing Quality 4 stars - So far itโs been good, it could have more vocabulary to increase the storyโs depth, though thereโs still a few errors in spelling or grammar. Stability of Updates 4 stars - It updates it every 1 or 2 days, should be more consistent like either choose update every 2 days or every day. (I just want more chapters) Story Development 4 stars - So far I like where the story is going but itโs a bit too soon to tell if itโs great. Character Design 4 stars - Same as above a bit too soon to tell, though for yanderes I hope for more variety of them throughout the story. MC is not completely dumb or naive. World Background 3 stars - I donโt know if I should give it a four star but so far all we know are kingdoms, magic system and I think continent/s I donโt completely remember. Overall: 3.8 stars
this novel is amazing,it has the prefect amount of yandere, I just wish he could update at least once a week, but the plot is so great ๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐๐โค๐งก๐๐๐๐งก๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐งก๐๐งก๐๐งก๐๐๐๐๐๐งก๐๐งก๐๐๐๐๐งก๐๐งก๐๐๐๐๐๐งก๐๐๐๐
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