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Review Detail of Notright in A World Full of Yanderes

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Notright
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My First Review so don’t be to harsh Writing Quality 4 stars - So far it’s been good, it could have more vocabulary to increase the story’s depth, though there’s still a few errors in spelling or grammar. Stability of Updates 4 stars - It updates it every 1 or 2 days, should be more consistent like either choose update every 2 days or every day. (I just want more chapters) Story Development 4 stars - So far I like where the story is going but it’s a bit too soon to tell if it’s great. Character Design 4 stars - Same as above a bit too soon to tell, though for yanderes I hope for more variety of them throughout the story. MC is not completely dumb or naive. World Background 3 stars - I don’t know if I should give it a four star but so far all we know are kingdoms, magic system and I think continent/s I don’t completely remember. Overall: 3.8 stars

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A World Full of Yanderes

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Thanks for the feedback! I have lots of world background stuff planned, I will try to go for differnet types of yanderes though Im still working on that, and I can try giving more descriptive writing, im just not gonna comment on Updating schedule. Sorry I’m a bit lazy. Thanks for making my book have your first review, im proud!