I think you missed the point of my comment, in no context did i even say anything about owing any one anything so i would appreciate it if you didn't try to put words in my mouth. Also my main point was just how unreasonable to the put the price as high as it it. An example, i like reading actually good cultivation novels and one that ive found to be quite good is Villain Cultivator. Like most original novels on webnovel it has privileged chapters. it costs 200 coins as the highest price for extra chapters (10) per month and the chapters length rival at least 10 or so chapters of Cultivation Online. I Understand being a upstart writer isn't an extremely paying job especially on webnovel but, its a little shameless to post extra chapters to read for such an ridiculous price and short chapter length.
i feel like i lost 10000 braincells reading this chapter, ffs why is miaomiao letting himself being peerpresured into autistic ideas when he can completely avoid them, why is he worrried about being seen aas a villian in front of people who are already completly loyal to him through a fucking dao oath, he acts like a complete simp to his entire group anytime one of them wanta something that goes against what he wants. Author for **** sake ststop making miaomiao make stupid decisions in the name of progressing the plot, no one likes it and it happens llike every fucking 7 chapters or so and well see miaomiao doing something incredibly stupid even though he knows better, He KNEW better than to revoke the dao oath yet he still did it why, because author forced him to "Advance the plot". Advance the plot in other ways than making the Mc Legally Retarded.
So your telling me, not only is Dante Italian but he also has basically King Crimsons movement detection as well. This man is a mini Diavolo. Dante must die i don't care how or why but our MC gotta take his ability, i have literally only seen 1 novel who has had the main character has king crimsons ability and i need MORE!
i don't think you read and understood my comment, first off i want this author to succeed its a good thing to listen to readers opinions /ideas about how the story can progress forward, who knows the author may gain some inspiration or what not, however the amount of novels ive read where an author listens to what the majority people want when it comes to sexual relationships always ends up with the author soon declaring hiatus/ re-writing/ dropping said novel, because the majority of readers felt like the the novel quality has significantly decreased. It may not be just that said change, but it spirals out of control quickly and soon the authors then relies of the readers wants and needs to progress. So far i love this story its good and refreshing, and its stayed like this so far because of one simple reason he hasn't given in to what the readers want him to do. It's HIS story and so far its progressed extremely well and a good 98% who read the story likes it as well. Author should just keep doing whats he doing, cause hes doing great, so when i say dont give into readers wants and needs, thats me wanting to see this novel thrive and not join the bottom of the barrel where good novels gets dropped / indefinite hiatus. (or worse Expelled).
Dont revive the mother, dont listen to these degenarates, if u revive her your storys overall quality will plummet, let the degenarates go watch or read ****, dont let them turn your story(which i think is very good) into a sub par story that wont be liked as much and as a result you will drop the novel cause it isnt as good as before. Trust me it always happens, listening to readers on ideas for your story is good, its also good to take inspiration from some of these ideas however, never cater to readers sexual fantasy otherwise you get a shitty hentai novel you see on fanfic sections lately.
If alt jin didnt have fury then its safe to assume he had different abilities for his mangeko other than king crimson and shift. Cause lets be real if alt jin had king crimson no way would he ever lose a battle or die, its simply to overpowered not to mention it basically negates tonal magic if they try to use it in erased time.
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Id say either akame ga kill for - -Teigus, he could collect multiple of them and dissmantle or fuse them together in creating a tegiu that can be used by him for a long time. OR -Danger beasts, have Kira track and hunt down some S-SS level danger beasts and create his very own teigu, (a one piece armour that completely covers) and (A weapon that maybe has different forms or can change into 1 or 2 different weapons apart from the scythe). -Note that the highest ranking of a danger beasts in canon is S class or Super class so that gives you a lot of room to make intersting beasts in SS class and abilities. - Esdeath (like for the love of god if he goes to akame ga kill he better get the busty blue yandere waifu). The other world i would suggest, while it dosen't have a really high combat scale i think it would be interesting to go to Full Metal Alchemist Brotherhood (FMA:Brotherhood) -First off he can spend less time fighting wise and more time learning alchemy there to use as another form of combat and other things due to it his versatility , you only need the knowledge to make use of it. -second he can learn how to make a philosopher stone (and in the future make the recipe create a better result). While making a philosopher stone in FMAB world would be highly frowned upon, im sure in the future he'll go to worlds that are ****ed up and the majority needs to die(Like akame ga kill) or he'll need to kill lots of people that are his enemies in later worlds. Third world, i know u said u wont go to this world but hear me, Mirai Nikki (Future Diary) -Now if you go to world instead of focusing on the diaries and people who would be really weak, you could focus on The gods instead. you may be wondering what Gods? theres only deus, well you'd be right but, Deus Ex Machina is only the god of Time and Space, who has mastered the laws of cause and effect as well, making him the most powerful character in the series which is why he needs a successor otherwise the universe will be destroyed, (kind of like Arceus form pokemon). But, wheres the other lessor gods, such as god of fire, water, wind, earth, lighting, light, darkness, Ice, wood, metal, creation, destruction, etc. etc.... You get the point, instead of Kira focusing on the humand and diaries he can focus on the god sand start to train and fight his way from one god to the next in order to get strong enough and beat deus himself. The system can make a whole quest out of it and he gets rewards for defeating each boss, for example he beats the fire go, rewards- +10 levels, *Fires Kindling (Grants the user the affinity and talent for the use of fire on par with the god of fire himself), *special item, etc., you get the point. -Yuno Gasai(The Queen of yanderes herself) you could make it so that shes obsessed with Kira, and while shes fighting to become deus successor so that she can be stronger than him and love each other eternally, kira trying to beat deus before she can win the game, like a race to see who can become the ruler of time, space, cause and effect first.
Very good novel keep it up, this novel is a nice take on MHA on how flawed the MHA world truly is. BTW don't listen to the mentally challenged people in the comments giving 1 star, they're probably the kind of people who watch Dragon ball z and super and says that the show isn't repetitious.
This ability is just Fucking King Crimsons ability, i know u gonna be teaming up dante and Jay but, Jay better get FATES INTERVENTION A.KA King Crimsons ability, either by dante dying and jay loots his power or dante sacrificing his life for jay and again jay loots him. Cause i havent seen a novel or fan-fic that had the MC have the ability of King Crimson, so he better get it cause you are the first person to use King Crimson power in any novel i read.
I need more of this novel, its had me hooked for a while and im loving and chapter of it, i need longer chapters and more chapters cause there so good.
author since mao miaomiao already has the sword KQ which looks like it will slowly evovle into Killer Queen stand power wise, can u give mao miaomiao an extremely advanced element that no one has or a cultivation technique that gives the powers of King Crimson to mao miaomiao. At the end of this chapter it just felt like like ma miaomiao is setting up to become the boss. Hes a villan (kinda) who wants to grow strong to survive and now with him getting a 100% loyal hitman whos going to build hhis own team, its kinda remiming me of La Squadra. Also it be really fkn cool for and i think it make sense with allalle heavenly fate power and diavolo always proclaims fate chose him.
So far I really like the story and the novel, it has a interesting take on MCU crossover (kinda) fanfics, I like how he isn't given a ridiculously overpower cheat from the start like a system or world hopping powers (yet ;D). I am though very interested to see what happens when Eric not only masters the druid class and every other class, will a new special one appear that he needs to master before obtaining the next one or will he have a selection to higher tiered classes not seen in D&D that can drastically increase his powers in the MCU and turn him into a god maybe? I like the consistency of chapters 1 a day keeps the corona away, 2-3 a day will be like an early christmas/birthday. Good chapter length as well, id prefer if it was longer but thats just wanting to read more of the novel. The only complaint of mine would be him saying "owie" twice and "yippy" once, sounds a bit childish for a grown ass man. Overall Great story keep it up and I can't wait to read more of it cause I find that usually the best novels/fan-fics either getting dropped or thrown in the hiatus bin for centuries and I don't want this story to be like that.
A-continue the story and ley your writing improve.