Review Detail of SlyShadow in A World Full of Yanderes
Review detail
Although this piece has only 5 chapters at the moment of me writing this, I felt it deserved a review so more people can appreciate this work. First and foremost, the writing quality is very high. I find very few writing errors at all, and the ones I find are nearly imperceptible. The story development is pretty good so far. Some parts feel a little forced like how he was born, but it's still very easy to follow along and flows quite well. From what I've seen about the character design so far is exciting. The main character seems to have some hidden attribute that might be attracting yanderes. Not much to say about the updating stability as this is a pretty new story with minimal chapters. I can only hope that in the future there is a schedule! Chapter 5 has given a descriptive look at the new world. Overall I'm very excited to see where this story goes. And as always, praise the yandere.
A World Full of Yanderes
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Thanks for the feedback its really helpful, I will also try to be more smooth with the story development, I'm starting to get a good idea where I want it to go, so it should be smooth sailing from here. I also appreciate the comment on writing quality, though I feel mine is not up to par, I'm always trying to improve. Also when it comes to a schedule, I doubt I will create a specific time that my chapters come out, but ill attempt to have a chapter a day, with possible breaks on a weekend. Besides all that I appreciate the review and love a fellow Yandere enthusiast. Also CONGRATULATIONS! on becoming the first review my novel has ever received, though that doesn't mean much yet, I hope it will someday.