Reviews of A Tale After Four Lives

its amazing and new******************ww concept and direction love it please uploadddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd more cant wait for more reguler updates

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So it’s an interesting concept, but i just hope that he doesn’t go full thinking with dick, “she beautiful she better with me” im not against netori, hate netorare, so if you want add Yasaka,Grayfia,Venelana,Shuri or Phenex lady Im not against harems, i always like a good harem but it’s tedious when the mc, flirts with someone, add her to the harem, have sex and then never talk or have date with her again till the author decides that she needs more sex scene of her. Note for author to read: also if this is 1 year before Issei is born, means that Rias is born in April, and she would definitely needs a teacher ( so she doesn’t become a sloth princess like in the original), could also save Shuri, the mom of Koneko and Kuroka, Valerie Tepes so she doesn’t become and experiment for tepes faction/ khaos brigade Also Does mc gonna create a new faction? What’s the objective of mc? To be honest what im picturing right now of mc is going to feast in valhalla telling the gods his stories and being friends with thor, then probably going on a full hikaru genji plan with the main characters of the Dxd verse, i mean he did became the a titan that could use to train shirone and kuroka with senjutsu,, the elve life for magic training with asia, akeno,rias,and rosseweise, he could make issei a girl with magic, then train her by being a dragon... kiba,irina and xenovia whit the ability of the paladin, They all could be great servants, or commanders of your faction/harem And finally character that i like to recommend for the harem/faction: Raynare (she a little sadist but she did what she did for love to azazel plus she only has an easy to remove superiority complex, she could be like your secret black ops operations, when you know that doing something isn’t the right thing on public so you do it secretly) Sona (love glasses plus, she a great strategist) Tsubaki (idk she cool) Aika(in the light novel she became a very good magician, but i don’t remember her name , if it isn’t aika, is that girl with glasses that was a pervert in issei class) Murayama and katase (those two girls in the class that the trio spied on, the ones with swords) Riser peerage,they were literally sex slaves, (this probably doesn’t need to be but i would like to know what happened to them, after they are free) Gabriel (could fix gods system) Grayfia (love that maid) Venelana (sexy and probably could be the director of meetings and things in official parties, cause past noble) Serafall (maou, to calm the other factions) Ingvild leviathan (she literally can control dragons, it’s either she joins you or you kill her, cause she could literally control mc if strong enough) (Obviously all the mc of this world) Rias (destruction power is Op if well trained) Akeno (she’s kinda of a nephilim , neither holy or demonic elements are her weakness) Asia (a healer) Ravel (Phoenix tears) Xenovia (durandal) Koneko (nekoshou devil op, they were experimenting on her sister for a reason, just sairaorg was op and he only used touki) Kiba (i don’t care, any character in dxd that prefer to train technique over power is respectable cause training power is easier than perfecting a technique, plus i dont care if there is yaoi) Issei (Boosted gear can kill gods but i would like to change his/her personality) Gasper (dude, vampire that can stop time, easy dio jokes) Rossewaise (is one of the best magicians in valhalla, according to the light novel)

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It started off well but then it got really boring. He practically became a big nanny. Besides being fully a Beta.--------------------------------------------------

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It has an interesting premise, but the MC is pretty bland. All his wishes are just things he wants to keep from his previous lives, though he also asks for a "modest house in Kuoh", which I think is absurd. The main character also isn't really doing anything. There's no great, overarching goal, there's no desperate searching for power, he's just slogging through life. Overall, not something I'm interested in reading.

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Dude is He going to Romance at least someone i just read chap 3 but on comments said he just gave issei every single girl so was it the fun if he is not romance at least just one girl?

This is one of the best stories I've ever read, whether it's the development of the main character, the differentiation between the four lives he had, everything makes this story one of the most wonderful stories I've ever read and I'm looking forward to new chapters.

I really like this novel, please continue to keep posting more chapters. For the word count blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah

quite interesting synopsis, and it will be more interesting if this story starts from the first life until the fourth life and enters the world of dxd. mah because this is a fanfic so don't think too much about it

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Its a really well written fanfic, the only bad this is that the updates are slow. But **** it, I would much rather have quality than quantity.

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a good history with much potential and the mc is very interesting, but need more action is very slow to came to the history of the dxd for this i reccomend to finish this slow historys

Good writing and good character backstory. However, the MC does nothing except follow the anime storyline. Additionally, he has weak personal interactional. His only redeeming quality is that he cares for kids. Do expect to see much interaction. He barely shows care for his own elemental. He is very detached. It is like rereading dxd from a 3rd perspective. Not bad, but not great.

I honestly would recomemd this book to anyone who likes OP main characters. The mc always brings me a smile when he destroys his enemies. The only problem i have with this novel is the grammer and updating stability, not too bad tho.