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Adrianix1234
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So it’s an interesting concept, but i just hope that he doesn’t go full thinking with dick, “she beautiful she better with me” im not against netori, hate netorare, so if you want add Yasaka,Grayfia,Venelana,Shuri or Phenex lady Im not against harems, i always like a good harem but it’s tedious when the mc, flirts with someone, add her to the harem, have sex and then never talk or have date with her again till the author decides that she needs more sex scene of her. Note for author to read: also if this is 1 year before Issei is born, means that Rias is born in April, and she would definitely needs a teacher ( so she doesn’t become a sloth princess like in the original), could also save Shuri, the mom of Koneko and Kuroka, Valerie Tepes so she doesn’t become and experiment for tepes faction/ khaos brigade Also Does mc gonna create a new faction? What’s the objective of mc? To be honest what im picturing right now of mc is going to feast in valhalla telling the gods his stories and being friends with thor, then probably going on a full hikaru genji plan with the main characters of the Dxd verse, i mean he did became the a titan that could use to train shirone and kuroka with senjutsu,, the elve life for magic training with asia, akeno,rias,and rosseweise, he could make issei a girl with magic, then train her by being a dragon... kiba,irina and xenovia whit the ability of the paladin, They all could be great servants, or commanders of your faction/harem And finally character that i like to recommend for the harem/faction: Raynare (she a little sadist but she did what she did for love to azazel plus she only has an easy to remove superiority complex, she could be like your secret black ops operations, when you know that doing something isn’t the right thing on public so you do it secretly) Sona (love glasses plus, she a great strategist) Tsubaki (idk she cool) Aika(in the light novel she became a very good magician, but i don’t remember her name , if it isn’t aika, is that girl with glasses that was a pervert in issei class) Murayama and katase (those two girls in the class that the trio spied on, the ones with swords) Riser peerage,they were literally sex slaves, (this probably doesn’t need to be but i would like to know what happened to them, after they are free) Gabriel (could fix gods system) Grayfia (love that maid) Venelana (sexy and probably could be the director of meetings and things in official parties, cause past noble) Serafall (maou, to calm the other factions) Ingvild leviathan (she literally can control dragons, it’s either she joins you or you kill her, cause she could literally control mc if strong enough) (Obviously all the mc of this world) Rias (destruction power is Op if well trained) Akeno (she’s kinda of a nephilim , neither holy or demonic elements are her weakness) Asia (a healer) Ravel (Phoenix tears) Xenovia (durandal) Koneko (nekoshou devil op, they were experimenting on her sister for a reason, just sairaorg was op and he only used touki) Kiba (i don’t care, any character in dxd that prefer to train technique over power is respectable cause training power is easier than perfecting a technique, plus i dont care if there is yaoi) Issei (Boosted gear can kill gods but i would like to change his/her personality) Gasper (dude, vampire that can stop time, easy dio jokes) Rossewaise (is one of the best magicians in valhalla, according to the light novel)

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A Tale After Four Lives

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Bethrezhen
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Thanks, I don't think I'll be going the harem road thought, the mc is more of a loner so having a faction is out, but he will be a meddler that's for sure. I like the "teacher" idea and he will definitely be teaching but I also want him to be the one to do the dirty work so they don't have to. I want him to be a kind of guardian in the shadows that finishes the loose ends if you know what I mean. Drinking in Valhalla is a must and I want him to be a one girl type of person but I just don't know who yet so that's still up for debate.

Drain_the_innocent
Drain_the_innocentLv11Drain_the_innocent

Oh please, i would love to see a DxD fic that doesn't have a harem in it for once.

Bethrezhen:Thanks, I don't think I'll be going the harem road thought, the mc is more of a loner so having a faction is out, but he will be a meddler that's for sure. I like the "teacher" idea and he will definitely be teaching but I also want him to be the one to do the dirty work so they don't have to. I want him to be a kind of guardian in the shadows that finishes the loose ends if you know what I mean. Drinking in Valhalla is a must and I want him to be a one girl type of person but I just don't know who yet so that's still up for debate.
hizer0778
hizer0778Lv14hizer0778

yes it is good that it does not have any harem I am sick of them

Roon_Toon1
Roon_Toon1Lv14Roon_Toon1

this is the first time I heard of a DXD fanfic that doesn't have a harem I thought it was impossible but you proved me wrong

Bethrezhen:Thanks, I don't think I'll be going the harem road thought, the mc is more of a loner so having a faction is out, but he will be a meddler that's for sure. I like the "teacher" idea and he will definitely be teaching but I also want him to be the one to do the dirty work so they don't have to. I want him to be a kind of guardian in the shadows that finishes the loose ends if you know what I mean. Drinking in Valhalla is a must and I want him to be a one girl type of person but I just don't know who yet so that's still up for debate.
someRandomMob
someRandomMobLv4someRandomMob

a no-harem in dxd? Finally, tho I hope the story will be good, even if it is slow paced. its really rare to find somethin like this, so far this one and the ' Anihilation maker ' ffs is the only fanfics that is no harem in dxd in my Library. looking forward to this.