Sigheti
I don’t usually read one-shots like these because I feel like it would start to bore me....but this...oo***eeee This is really good for a one-shot, your vocabulary and writting skills are so smooth and honestly I haven’t read a good horror like this one. Keep it up honestly...hopefully you add more 😌✨
Now one-shots aren't usually my thing because I like continuous stories and there's not enough space to give it a good end but this one changed my mind. The twists and turns within it is incredible and I didn't see the story changing like that. The vocabulary used is concise but doesn't hinder the pacing.
Alright, let me start off by saying that this is an excellently written novel :D First off, the writing itself is flawless. Very smooth, descriptive, and clear. The use of punctuation is also perfect! :D Okay now for the best part. The way the author sets up the mood is impeccable. The author did not only plainly describe the location and such, but the way the author wrote it makes me feel the mood. It was a very immersive read, which is always a great thing, especially for a thriller/horror novel. Not only the mood, but the way the characters were portrayed is also top-notch for me. I like how the author did not focus on the appearance, but rather on small, subtle things that build up the character's traits. Like the way they move when they talk, the way they stutter, the way they react in situations, I love it! :D Sorry for the long review, the point is I really enjoyed reading this hehe! Great work, author! <3
The writing was good—pleasant enough to read with just a few lapses in grammar and a few awkward word choices. The beginning with the hitchhiker and the missing girls provided an interesting opening but I don’t see the value or purpose of these details at the end; literally it was like I was reading a series of events (like the description says) but those events weren’t really dependent on each other and barely connected at the end. Though I felt the story lacking in execution and plot, it has overall an intiguing premise.
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This is a nice, creepy, little story about a guy who goes into what may be a haunted house and gets scared. There isn't a whole lot to it, from a plot standpoint, but the character is stringly-developed and the author brings you into the story, putting you in his character's shoes and letting you feel his fear.
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