Review Detail of NightWind in A Hitchhiker, A House, and Sausages

Okay, nothing to say about the writing or the grammar- it was all impeccable. Many words that I dare not use in my story because I don't quite know their uses were masterfully placed in this story. The highlight for me, though was the way it FELT like a horror story. It was a normal day, drab and gray at first. Then the normal day is interspersed with things that feel a little creepy, but it was no big deal. There are interactions with Elena, but...then it suddenly wasn't Elena. And the dial turned up ten notches on the horror! Suddenly their whole interaction felt terrifying! Ack! Anyway, I really liked this story so far; even with only a single chapter, it was very long and felt like five or six. Also excellently crafted, I don't hesitate to give it a recommend!