binni_seon
I really love the entire concept of having unfinished business, to me it brings so much depth into the story. Not only am I concerned with the deception that had occurred on their past I am also very interested in weather things will work out this time... The female lead has such a deep feeling for the things around her and this personally made me feel many of her emotions along with the events around her. I love it❤️ I also enjoyed the world building, it made feel as if I were in the room with her at each point in time.
To my surprise, I remembered a scene from the Korean film Extreme Job as soon as I saw the chapter on chicken restaurants. Okay, so without further ado, the first issue that worried me was that too many new people were introduced in the first few chapters. As a result, my brain's memory capacity, which wasn't very high, to begin with, became overloaded trying to keep track of all of the new faces. That is the one thing that disturbs me about it. Other than that, everything else is fantastic, and I want to know how their story progresses. If I may ask, would you consider this a romance novel? I can't seem to find the tag.
So far I believe the writing quality needs to be upgraded, especially in the second para, it looks more like a script than a novel. It lacks expressions and elaboration of event details. Although I've read only intial chapter I think there's a lot of potential in this plot and this novel can be improved if author uses precise usage of words accordingly. Other than that, I found it pretty engaging and I wish the author all the best