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This is the first time I've responded to my fanfiction review in a long time. First and foremost, I appreciate you for sharing your experiences, and your criticism is constructive. I admit that the part you pointed out is true, and I can't do anything but accept it because it is part of my learning. Perhaps this sounds shameless, but would you mind reading and reviewing my other fanfiction?
Sorry for my late response. Kiyoshi Fujino is the MC, and he is treated as such in the series, so I did the same here. There is no NTR, but some female characters may express interest in other male characters. If you have read the manga, you will definitely know, and it is the MC's responsibility to seize that opportunity. Don't worry. I, too, dislike having multiple MCs.
I saw your review while stalking your profile, but it didn't appear in my fanfiction. Possibly, this is a bug. First of all, thank you for the compliment. I truly do not deserve it. To be honest, I don't dislike systems and such. I just don't have a strong enough memory to remember all those numbers and skills. The rest is exactly as you said. Another thing that surprised me was that I didn't expect you to read my other fanfiction. Sorry I can't respond to the rest, but thank you for your positive review.
It feels strange to say this, but I appreciated your comment. You didn't hesitate to point out the flaws in my story, and you even tried to provide me with a variety of options, which helped me grow in a positive way. If you don't mind, I expect you to continue.
F**k... seeing you this excited makes me even more afraid of disappointing you. To be honest, I already have a lot of stock for this fanfiction, and changing the plot of a story I've written to please my readers is not my hobby... d*mn it, if it's like this, I'll just do whatever I want.
This is the first time I've made an MC with some flaws because I'm already bored with perfect MCs, so I hope you can put up with him for a while. As you might expect, the prison arc is unavoidable. I'm also catching up with the manga, so I'm just as excited as you are.
As you said, it was upsetting to see Kiyoshi fail in his endeavors. I once considered not focusing on prison, but I can only blame my imagination for not being as impressive as I had hoped. Don't worry. The road ahead is still long. I haven't even mentioned the Aboveground Student Council.
Tienes razón, este MC es tan estúpido. Esta es la primera vez que escribo un MC con una personalidad como esta y, para ser honesto, escribir un MC perfecto es realmente aburrido, especialmente si siempre puede superar todos los problemas que se le presentan. En conclusión, todavía no me aburro de escribir este MC. Porque las primeras experiencias son dulces, ¿no crees?
I'm not the author who outlines what I write but instead pours out whatever is on my mind when I start typing on the keyboard. So, for the harem, you can expect to get every route you want because, basically, this series has every type of heroine.