Review Detail of Sneakycat098 in A BILLIONAIRE'S TRUST GAME

So far I believe the writing quality needs to be upgraded, especially in the second para, it looks more like a script than a novel. It lacks expressions and elaboration of event details. Although I've read only intial chapter I think there's a lot of potential in this plot and this novel can be improved if author uses precise usage of words accordingly. Other than that, I found it pretty engaging and I wish the author all the best