_eellaabbee
Writing
of reading
201
Read books
Badges
4Moments
103
_eellaabbee1yrPostedThe story began with a great chapter that caught me up; in fact, every chapter had something that hooked me up, which is why I read it till the latest chapter, and I really like to read more. The story development is so interesting that you can tell the writer put a lot of effort into drafting it. There is nothing more I can add about the author's narration of each scenario because it is already well-written. And as of now my favorite character is Isha, I really love her vibe and I would love to meet the other characters in the next chapters. Keep writing!!! <333
- _eellaabbee1yrCommented
I WANT A FRIEND LIKE ISHA!!!
"What bitches, your grand ma is a blackbelt at Taekwondo and karate. Do you think I will still be silent as you bully my only friend?" Yes, this particular petite girl with a height of 5. 4 had kicked a person double her size across the cafeteria. Some of the students were openly laughing at the condition of the boys. By now the teachers had arrived. The boys, me, and Isha were brought to the principal's office. The teachers were giving me stern looks. Well, who would not if you get into a fight half away through your first day at school. The look on the principal's face was priceless as we all stepped into his office. The boys were suspended for a week as they already had been given their last chances. Isha got a warning and, I was to stay behind to talk. - _eellaabbee1yrCommented
omg!
I stood up picked up the tray that Isha had set aside and flung it toward his face causing him to fall to the floor with a bleeding nose. - _eellaabbee1yrCommented
lol
"Well, sir. If you don't have something expensive then your attractive face won't be of any use to get the attention of girls." She said laughing at my horrified face. - _eellaabbee1yrCommented"No, but I send an email to all the colleges and universities that we have investments, So I just need to cancel the others as all have sent the acceptance letter."
- _eellaabbee1yrCommented
nice narrative
The place was covered with fog and darkness with the occasional flashing of light. Wolf was howling in the distance. I was walking toward something and also nothing. The fog cleared a little and I could make out the outlines of trees and thick bushes and a road ahead. It was some kind of lone road in the middle of the forest. The forest trees create a canopy to shield the road from the light. It was one that you imagine in fairy tales but also a lonely road that could lead you to your doom. I was walking forward in search of the end of the road but I felt like I have been walking forever. Sometimes a squirrel would cross my path a rabbit but never a human. It was like me alone in my world. Then suddenly an enormous black wolf appeared staring right into my eyes. Its eyes were Midnight black like its fur. Somehow seeing such a big wolf, I did not feel scared but was a peace. The fog came again covering my vision. - _eellaabbee1yrReplied to trumpet_creeper01
- _eellaabbee1yrPosted
This is a fantastic novel; it began with an exciting scenario that drew me in as a reader, and the plot progression is unique. I am not very expert when it comes to English grammars but I can tell that the story was pretty well-narrated, like the way the settings was describe an how the author choose words to describe the action scene was superb. This is the kinds of story I would literally recommend to my friends. Nice work, author! <3
- _eellaabbee1yrCommented
his father is not fathering at this moment
" Who told him to act out when I only told him to use his eyes and brain? He went against my orders and now wants me to clean up his mess? Tell him to get back here in one piece. If he is unable to get out alive from this small attack, how is he going to protect himself and the empire? If he couldn't come back alive, well his presence is not needed to reign my territory after me, " saying that, his father smashed the phone and line beeped too loud in Hyuk's ears. - _eellaabbee1yrReplied to Surbhi_mithil
- _eellaabbee1yrPosted
This story is fascinating. Despite being brief, the synopsis provided information on what to expect from the narrative. I am sure readers will be drawn in by the character design because of its distinctive traits. I adore how the author vividly describes each situation and makes the readers feel a connection with the characters. Overall, it was a good story. Keep it up! <3
- _eellaabbee1yrCommented
coz that is how you do it girl
This paragraph has been deleted. - _eellaabbee1yrCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.