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Comments of chapter undefined of In Marvel as a Skeleton

LostWizard
LostWizardLv4LostWizard

Your seriously trying to tell me that the system isn't sentient? You think I'm stupid?

Berserk_Asura
Berserk_AsuraAuthorBerserk_Asura

the guide is like the Dokkabei from Omniscient Readers Viewpoint. He's there to explain the rules, and basics of the system. He permanently goes away in ch-12. and that's the second time he appears after the first chapter.

Guri_01_09
Guri_01_09Lv4Guri_01_09

Go with Ainz Ool Gown based look. 🔥🔥

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Supreme_Leader
Supreme_LeaderLv12Supreme_Leader

You had my interest with Lady Death, And now you have my attention with Good Grammar. In the last hour I have read and dropped about 4 or so Fanfics on Webnovel. The premise are usually interesting but the grammar is horrendous. Not to mention the obvious use of ChatGPT. I don't mind Authors using ChatGPT to write but they should atleast try to edit it to make it seem like it was written by a human. The narration written by AI are so melodramatic, I can't help but cringe everytime. Anyway. I'm looking forward to losing the guide.

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Dissapointed_One
Dissapointed_OneLv4Dissapointed_One

It was so so. Pretty boring. I'd recommend to start it in the dungeon already, with some action and show the whole thing with robort guide as a SHORT flashback a little later. You don't have to *EXPLAIN EVERYTHING* immediately.

Anonny_Anonymous
Anonny_AnonymousLv1Anonny_Anonymous

An interesting start, but I prefer no strings attached when it comes to reincarnation/transmigration. Whether it’s entertaining a ROB or someone else, I don’t like any requirements related to the rebirth.

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proganerx_Dave
proganerx_DaveLv4proganerx_Dave

This is an interesting start and this reminds me of the "Don't harm me I'm friendly" Novel

mightyoceanmaster
mightyoceanmasterLv13mightyoceanmaster

thank you author :) have a great day, night, morning, evening and afternoon. :)

LUBT
LUBTLv2LUBT

low agility as a skeleton bro brook would be disapointet

ZeHooD
ZeHooDLv13ZeHooD

Quick but an important question: Did he has Skelepathy?

Debadatta_Bhoi
Debadatta_BhoiLv4Debadatta_Bhoi

you should have eaten vigra