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I would like to know what clans they are. And does he not even have seals to defend his property? I would have thought Tsunade would gift him some from her clan.
Again, I thought she wanted to use her TARDIS. Why use the system again when the TARDIS is more comfortable and is actually feeling neglected?
NOO! Not more dates and cheesy romance, it's already enough as it is. I always hated harem for multiple reasons, one of them being that the members are neglected but now I think I prefer them fading into the background.
I thought she was going to use her true form, what a disappointment.
Honestly? I'm. considering if I should continue. I'm not a man of many words, so pumping out chapters with 4k to 8k is almost torture. The support is also not very good with only about 5 people who comment despite already having 1/4 the word count of my old one in total. Then there's also the fact that I'm currently very busy with personal stuff and a bit sick. But yeah, pretty sure I will continue, the time between chapters will just increase.
Either you make him a non human or you don't, you can't just make him a non human for the nice powers and say some bullshit like "because of his human instincts"
He doesn't have retention and you know it, stop trying to make others stronger.
He's an idiot. Why endanger himself if he can just send a mitosis clone that no one can tell the difference from?
Please don't let Hiruzen survive. It's already bad enough that he is getting fooled by his lies, no need to save him as well.
Pretty sure Karin is going to be the love interest but I would have preferred others, even the sister of Terumi Mei would have been a better choice.