Vencha
Good I like the current style of the story But I would also like it to have more details for example How the people and nobles react to the things Mc does For example when he brought the dragon egg back I would really like to see the King's reaction of the princess and the nobles and the people, I think it's better to just show people's reactions to the things that Mc does, which I think if you put too much detail into the story it will get very boring
Yeah. A little more detail wouldn’t hurt, but not the kind of detail that slows the plot. For example, talking about how he unlocked an ability, and his bloodline the ability is known to exist in the purest of bloodlines. And it’s said to…….see something like this you’re slowing the plot. And…..it’s not nice. But a little detail wouldn’t hurt, maybe where it’s needed, I don’t know where since I don’t know how you plan to develop the story, but a little wouldn’t hurt.