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Comments of chapter undefined of HOTD- Family above All

ylakata12
ylakata12Lv5ylakata12

add quantity please

charn
charnLv4charn

You can continue as it is and add a romance between rhanerya and mc

dukroger
dukrogerLv6dukroger

I recommend more depth, sometimes things are a little quick, besides, it would be cool to show the impact of the MC's actions, for commoners and nobles, a balance between the micro and the macro would be ideal for a better view of the world and those who live in it. there.

Ice_Phoenix1322
Ice_Phoenix1322Lv3Ice_Phoenix1322

a bit more detail wouldn't hurt

Daoistkq4gJg
Daoistkq4gJgLv1Daoistkq4gJg

Good I like the current style of the story But I would also like it to have more details for example How the people and nobles react to the things Mc does For example when he brought the dragon egg back I would really like to see the King's reaction of the princess and the nobles and the people, I think it's better to just show people's reactions to the things that Mc does, which I think if you put too much detail into the story it will get very boring

Son_Gohan_6065
Son_Gohan_6065Lv2Son_Gohan_6065

Both, depends on what detail is being focused on. If more detail make the pacing too slow, then it is not preferable. As long as similar pacing can be continued,more details will be appreciated.Details about romance, war, conflict, and politics is appreciatied,

mortalMika
mortalMikaLv13mortalMika

mortalMika
mortalMikaLv13mortalMika

Lector007
Lector007Lv4Lector007

It is perfect as it is

Overlord_
Overlord_Lv2Overlord_

No

Mulato_69
Mulato_69Lv4Mulato_69

you are doing great as it is

Intense_Gaming_5908
Intense_Gaming_5908Lv4Intense_Gaming_5908

its good enough, i like the way you write.

Sad_Vip
Sad_VipLv3Sad_Vip

2

Rivano_Varion
Rivano_VarionLv2Rivano_Varion

No

Eisenhand
EisenhandLv1Eisenhand

No, its ok

Sukesh_Christudas
Sukesh_ChristudasLv1Sukesh_Christudas

Posting longer and more number of chapters would be much appreciated

Syawal_Abizar
Syawal_AbizarLv11Syawal_Abizar

2

Oleg_Nikitin
Oleg_NikitinLv1Oleg_Nikitin

Немного подробнее было бы лучше.

tasa_jom
tasa_jomLv4tasa_jom

Details are always good choices

Zayji_Vinsmoke
Zayji_VinsmokeLv4Zayji_Vinsmoke

Incorporate the giants to his army and teach them how to build architecture! They are a great force against the dragons, imagine a giant army with crossbow...

Daoist31LJxu
Daoist31LJxuLv2Daoist31LJxu

Yeah. A little more detail wouldn’t hurt, but not the kind of detail that slows the plot. For example, talking about how he unlocked an ability, and his bloodline the ability is known to exist in the purest of bloodlines. And it’s said to…….see something like this you’re slowing the plot. And…..it’s not nice. But a little detail wouldn’t hurt, maybe where it’s needed, I don’t know where since I don’t know how you plan to develop the story, but a little wouldn’t hurt.