Mulato_69

The idea was good. The story was written badly by the time it got near the dance and the timeline is messed up

Finally an exciting world of this fanfic

MC should travel to war like worlds. Azeroth in Warcraft especially during War of the Ancients, Sith Wars in Star Wars. Sanctuary in Diablo

This chapter feels forced. The development of the story would have been the MC overshadowing Superman and the focus would be on him. The pkotbin this chapter feels forced just sobthat the direction is still aligned with original

The story is too dull and lacks an excitement The plot and concept is good but the writing was done SO BAD Chapters 1-5 has so so LITTLE TO NO Progression at all. Author introduced MC's ability but did not focus the story development from it but instead wrote about MC surviving in the wilderness and what not that I barely remembered anything as I was just skimming through or decided to skip the chapter i am still hoping it gets better, but the way the story is written even in chapter 10, it just feels dull

same as this one. its like writers these days do not know how to build up the story development. So many words and paragrphs used that can be expressed in 2-3 sentences

author's writing style is rehashing the original for a couple of chapters then later on the Mc becomes more active. Not an efficient way of story telling but it is the author's style

Is this an AU? Starks do not have Targaryen Blood until Jon Snow

The passive agressive direction of the story is too dull So many internal monologues and introspection but no story development

MC Could have just captured the legion of 9 million dragons just fot kicks hahaha. He could have his own dragon army