Intense_Gaming_5908

if the story has this kind of plot then I am hooked

why is it so exciting 🫠🫠

hey there this is stan , you no.1 fan , good chapter man

disappointing

ohmo , i didnt know

Hi Author, I appreciate your effort, but I feel the story could use some improvement. It seems a bit rushed and inconsistent. The protagonist feels overpowered, yet they don’t use their abilities effectively. Perhaps you could focus on giving them just one or two powers and exploring those in depth. Alternatively, if they’re meant to be very powerful, consider showing them dominating their challenges in a way that feels earned. Also, please check for grammatical errors to improve readability. Keep up the hard work!

what are you doing author, why are you so evil?

Author is not consistence. maybe consider rebooting the fan fic