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  • dukroger
    dukroger2d
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    The author is a beginner, but even so the story has maintained a balance, the author himself said that he doesn't have much knowledge of the books and TV series, but he decided to venture out, so small errors or things different from the originals can happen, but nothing that spoils the story or cannot be edited later. I liked that the golden finger wasn't something exaggerated, I hope he continues the good work, I wish him and all of us blessings.

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    Game of Thrones: Auron Blackfyre's Tale
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  • dukroger
    dukroger2d
    Commented

    the price of the crown, it's a good theme song for your story, I recommend keeping this style, songs that are too modern may not be very good for this world and time.

    Ch 8 Chapter 7
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    Game of Thrones: Auron Blackfyre's Tale
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  • dukroger
    dukroger6d
    Replied to Mytici

    In fact, I noticed it only after the translator put it in the footer of the index.

    Ch 11 Chapter 11: Spells
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    DC: Dimensional Luck
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  • dukroger
    dukroger7d
    Commented

    Very well, the story is developing slowly, the characters are reasonably realistic, the interaction between the world, the MC and other people is ok. Keep developing like this, slowly and steadily, the golden fingers of the story are already exaggerated, so for the story not to lose its excitement, care must be taken. I know it's a dangerous world, but that's what captivates readers, the adventure, the effort, personal overcoming, growth and maturity, both of the mc and the other characters.

    Ch 11 Chapter 11: Spells
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    DC: Dimensional Luck
    Anime & Comics · Sothisq
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  • dukroger
    dukroger8d
    Commented

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    Ch 44 Chapter 44 Nick Fury
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    Marvel: Tech System
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  • dukroger
    dukroger8d
    Replied to Marcia_05

    You can make an MC who gains a Dimensional seed, the space starts the size of an island, it will have portals to access other worlds, and through research and study, and obtain materials from these worlds, the rarer the better, this dimension will grow, and be able to reproduce these materials over time, even living beings. The mc's power could be the ability to receive part of the characteristics of the races that the dimension is capable of creating over time, of course he would have to work hard in research and training to control and strengthen himself, but it would be an interesting story. The main world where the mc would appear, you can make an original world, like medieval fantasy, with magic and other powers, and your mc would have to over time establish a domain and territory, high-tech things or magic from different worlds could work bad due to conflicts between world rules, but they could serve as inspiration for the MC to create compatible versions in their territory. So we would have a story of building a kingdom and at the same time visiting other worlds, without one thing getting in the way of the other, and the particular dimension could become a home for beings who are refugees from other worlds and a place of protection and hope, a type of sanctuary. .

    Ch 42 Chapter forty-two: High Council.
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    ASOIAF/GOT: Minecraft in Essos.
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  • dukroger
    dukroger8d
    Commented

    The story has potential, but the author has to be careful, many stories end up getting boring because Mc manages everything, without much effort and too quickly. I recommend developing things in a way that he has to train control, be it items or skills, group chat is a cool idea, but the roulette wheel must suffer serious limitations, like power of quantities limited to a certain amount at each level , for example SSS only 3, SS 4,S 10, A 100, B 200, C 1.000, D 10.000, E 1.000,000.After finishing this, this system would disappear and the mc would have to fend for himself.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5: Gacha
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    DC: Dimensional Luck
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  • dukroger
    dukroger8d
    Commented

    The world of Marvel films and series after Wokerism got out of control became horrible, in fact not only films, comics and animations suffer from this. Thank God that manga and oriental animation, were mostly not contaminated by this, if not instead entertainment, we would have material that attempts to narrate identity politics and brainwashing.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Transmigration
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    An Osmosian in Marvel (MCU Fanfiction)
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  • dukroger
    dukroger9d
    Commented

    I wonder if mc can gain access to other worlds with similar themes, the Lord of the Rings, Diablo, Warcraft, Eragorn, Harry Potter, The Withe, even worlds like dc and Marvel, but in the cases of these worlds with a modern setting he would have restrictions regarding technology and things like that due to differences in world essences.

    Ch 42 Chapter forty-two: High Council.
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    ASOIAF/GOT: Minecraft in Essos.
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  • dukroger
    dukroger9d
    Commented

    There is a good chance that a serum could be created using the blood of Hulk's cousin to facilitate the transformation and reduce the effects on the individual's mind.

    Ch 72 Chapter 71
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    In Marvel As Dante
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  • dukroger
    dukroger9d
    Commented

    Brooding, new empire, Kree, Builders, Shi'ars, Chitauri, Skrulls, Klyntar. These are the largest governments and civilizations in Marvel, taking into account that Asgard should be in a different space next to other divine territories, the setting of the films changed this, unfortunately, taking away some of the mystery of the Gods and making them look like aliens.

    Ch 25 C25 Knee-Nova War! & Escape!
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    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
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  • dukroger
    dukroger13d
    Commented

    Having a basic knowledge of other mythologies is essential, about the plot just remember basic things, such as the sacred pieces, the end beast, some notable characters, after all there are many gods, dimensions and things to be explored, as it is not a world pure Greek mythical, certain levels of power have to be evaluated, even certain characteristics of deities and their stories, it would be cool if this world had connections like DC, Marvel, Percy Jackson, being an amalgamation of these things, it would diversify it more and increase the possibilities .

    Ch 17 Poll
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    Reborn As Hades (DxD)
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  • dukroger
    dukroger13d
    Commented

    I hope that in addition to films and series this world can be formed by animation too, there are good Marvel animations that can help this world to be better, an interesting thing, in animations and comics Asgard and Olympus as well as other places of Gods, are in a separate dimension, they do not live on other planets, they are not simple aliens.

    Ch 42 Chapter 42 Annoying Reporter
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    Marvel: Tech System
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  • dukroger
    dukroger16d
    Replied to itsDhi

    One thing to note is that each world has different laws and principles, an example is that the formula for producing gunpowder may not work the same, or making glass or cement, even solidity or resistance characteristics of minerals, wood and things like that. Therefore, it would not be possible to simply want to bring technology, magic or concepts of rules or theories from one world to another, although certain things could serve as inspiration, such as the use of machines, gear concepts and things like that, but to apply each world I would have to do research and adapt materials and things like that.

    Ch 3 Shenron: Grant me Wishes! (2/2)
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    Domination: Limitless Growth
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  • dukroger
    dukroger16d
    Replied to itsDhi

    When the mc obtains certain quantities of materials, the dimension would create a core, this core would generate that same material, the minimum quantity would be 100 kg, which would generate 100 grams per day, and up to a ton, which core would generate 1 kg per day, of course the objective is not to be a looter, over time the mc dimension would generate a sister core, this core would be placed in the world of origin of the material, so the two realities would be helping each other, the same would happen with plants and other materials, so both the mc and its dimension would grow more and the resources they obtained over time would also benefit.

    Ch 3 Shenron: Grant me Wishes! (2/2)
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    Domination: Limitless Growth
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  • dukroger
    dukroger16d
    Replied to itsDhi

    Got it, cool concept. Friend, I have an idea for a future work, you can integrate the mc into a Dimensional seed, it will start with a space the size of an island, from there you can start opening doors to different worlds, and the mc through the adventure in these worlds can strengthen and expand his dimension, even allowing the MC to create new races and materials over time based on the worlds he had access to. He can make a territory of his own, he can get residents from different worlds, it would be an interesting story. The mc can acquire characteristics of races that he can become residents, this has good potential, you are a good author, if one day you want to develop it I'll leave this idea to you.

    Ch 3 Shenron: Grant me Wishes! (2/2)
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    Domination: Limitless Growth
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  • dukroger
    dukroger16d
    Replied to itsDhi

    So without interference from other reincarnations, but Gods as above all and presence will be maintained? like certain multiversal beings and the creators of the universes, if they are excluded, things can get strange.

    Ch 3 Shenron: Grant me Wishes! (2/2)
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    Domination: Limitless Growth
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  • dukroger
    dukroger16d
    Commented
    Ch 4 Wait a minute, who am I?
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    Domination: Limitless Growth
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  • dukroger
    dukroger16d
    Commented

    I didn't understand the desire about the multiverse, can it travel without running the risk of divine interference and the like?

    Ch 3 Shenron: Grant me Wishes! (2/2)
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  • dukroger
    dukroger16d
    Commented

    It's not necessary, although the world has some beauties, just put a few things between the lines of the story, this will be more elegant than scenes that seem taken from pornography.

    Ch 68 -IMPORTANT QUESTION OF AUTHOR-
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