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  • dukroger
    dukroger10 days ago
    Replied to Mulato_69

    The release speed is already normal for Internet stories, but the change in the way of writing is noticeable, the author is clearly wanting to make a "hero's journey", in addition to developing more original characters from the worlds, even from Marvel itself, which is the base world, that's fine, but only if the story wasn't so advanced, and the model of him traveling to a real version of game worlds is a more realistic and even cool concept, but again this would have to be put in place before, now it looks like a regression instead of progress.

  • dukroger
    dukroger11 days ago
    Commented

    The author made the MC almost die to druids, and look, they are not even druids from certain worlds, with powers to summon entities or planetary powers, imagine what the hunt would do to the MC like that? Of course it all depends on the author, but honestly this story really needs to be revised from the beginning, like if it were always like this, him being able to connect to game worlds, and maybe gaining some things in missions, like lineage and technology, it would be better to accompany the growth of the MC, not to mention involving more worlds and characters, but that requires a drastic change in the story in general, not to mention using more things from Marvel itself.

  • dukroger
    dukroger11 days ago
    Commented

    In the same way that the MC is evolving, this also happens with Cortana. For me, this only demonstrates the risks that the MC's home world offers, even without him trying to provoke anyone.

  • dukroger
    dukroger13 days ago
    Commented

    We want to see the MC grow, but this should have been done at the beginning of the story. Now it seems like the author has noticed his mistake in giving too many, and too strong, powers and tries to fix it by creating a hero's journey. After the development of the beginning and giving several experiences, this seems a bit forced. Damn, if it were an entity that was too powerful like it happened before or something like that. But even Druids from The Witcher, who compared to other worlds, are not that powerful. This just shows that without the MC developing using things like serums or potions and its own rituals, without being from the system, it is very weak. With the level of allies they have, they should have already studied the super soldier serum, virus extremes, heart-shaped plant, ky potions made from dragon bones. This exists in New York, in several series like Agents of the Shield, Secret Wars, Falcon and Winter Soldier. These things end up appearing in large quantities and even working together. The MC seems to only think about the game system and forget about Marvel's potential!

  • dukroger
    dukroger17 days ago
    Replied to Just_act_lazy

    Dude, there were a lot of comics that ended up with good characters, especially after the 2000s, they say it was wokerism that gradually infiltrated, I know we see things from the MC's point of view, and that he's a native, but it's clear that they made certain characters jerks, probably as a result of the vision of new comics and movies, since there are older and better animations and comics, despite their strong personalities, they weren't that jerks.

  • dukroger
    dukroger18 days ago
    Replied to Lol_2050

    The sentinel serum is somewhat complicated, the birth of the sentinel and void is an unchangeable point, if the MC takes the serum perhaps he will gain maximum power comparable to the boy soldier from the TV series The Boys, but it is almost impossible to gain the power of the sentinel, not to mention the risk of the void entity that comes along.

  • dukroger
    dukroger18 days ago
    Commented

    The sentinel serum is somewhat complicated, the birth of the sentinel and void is an unchangeable point, if the MC takes the serum perhaps he will gain maximum power comparable to the boy soldier from the TV series The Boys, but it is almost impossible to gain the power of the sentinel, not to mention the risk of the void entity that comes along.

  • dukroger
    dukroger18 days ago
    Commented

    Will the MC get involved in things regarding the Sentinel? Look, the Void is a real risk, if the MCU takes it seriously like in the first movie, it will be an element worthy of an apocalyptic crisis.