I Reap Souls In DC (Bleach X DC comics)

I really do enjoy this fic, but honestly... the character progression is literally unconsciousness. Whenever something happens he loses control, by comparison he's worse than the she-hulk on her period. At least for the chapters that was out when i was writing this poor review, he needs rescuing every 5th chapter. Basically a damsel in distress all the time, not sure when that is changing, but the writing is amazing overall.

its going way too slow for a story that does not give readers any context about what is happening. Like reader already have read 5 chapters but still do not know the basis of the plot and what is happening and why is it happening

I do not like mc, not his fight with chesire, not a that author doesnt know bleach. This whole mystery you have going on is simply annoying with this type of mc. THis feels like i am reading about a victim which i do not like. Read until chapter 16.

Clubky writing without any explanation to what is happening to the story at all. I’m assuming the auhtor assumes we have read the synopsis because the first chapter doesn’t give any context to anything at all. Knowing this author from his avatar fic he probably won’t explain anything in a response to this and just cry and insult the readers for not understanding his writing.

I do not like mc, not his fight with chesire, not a that author doesnt know bleach. This whole mystery you have going on is simply annoying with this type of mc. THis feels like i am reading about a victim which i do not like.

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I hate this, I find it so r*tarded and the mc and setup, it’s all hella dumb. !*This is just my opinion though*!

Author does what I call a pro gamer move for creating mystery. i.e remove 90% of the material of the story in order to create cryptic mystery. jokes aside, that's not mystery. Forcefully withholding things from the reader is not mystery, it may sound similar to being curious of the unknown of what's happening or to come but it's not mystery. The writing is a mess, and the mc spends most of his time being unconscious. The premise sounds exciting tbh, the start also was very good. But author needs to work on the plot and how it develops. Many of the chapters feel like they are missing 2-3 chapters in between. e.g - taskforce x gets attacked by Harley n friends, the chapters ends, no conclusion to the fight. the next time they appear they are all together fighting against mc in the league of assassin compound, then comes to justice league too. so there's like a chaos of fighting between the taskforce, also vs mc, also vs batman, also Batman vs mc, also justice league vs mc. yeah sounds so chaotic right. i wouldn't recommend this fic unless u have too much time.

is it Harem or single heroine or no love interest

The start was great, amazing even, yet it all fell as the story progressed, the mc become a full-fledged anime like character by 150 chapters...

The story’s pacing is horible and it feels all over the place. Too many things are happening all at once and the author has no control over it. The idea seems interesting, but not the execution.

I mean i havent gotten far into the story yet only 6 chapters but im not currently liking the pace of the story, i guess ill maybe check in later or something i depends on if i think its worth it

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I read until chapter 152, and man after chapter 70, everything went downhill, strong enemies, the mc also never trains '-', and there's the issue of drama too, he could have eliminated the obstacles a long time ago, but he didn't do it because of the author, worst dc and bleach fanfic....

Its trash pain and simple characters dont act like themselves and you litterly cant undertand anything in the beginning... . . . . . .. .. . . . . . .. . .. . .. . .. . . . .. . . .. .

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Author-san, you're doing a great work, keept it up. Please, don't destroy by adding harem, more than 95% of novels already have harem attached to them, and it's extremely frustrating to find one that is not tainted with the stench of harem. Although I don't mind Romance, but it would even be better without romance. Please, keep a calm mind and try not to be influenced by harem freaks who can't get any chicks in rl.🥺

This fic has too many negative reviews, I mean at first I get it since in the beginning i myself wasn't the biggest fan of the story but it gets better. The story, power scaling and the MC all improved to the point where I would consider this as one of the best DC fics I have ever read.

God that was plain bad. With how he lived in the past, you expect him to be more grown up and all that but when he arrived in DC, he turned up different. You also tend to be very vague a lot of times, expecting readers to just go with it. The character peovression also suffers. Just a disappointment.