Item: I Reap Souls In DC (Bleach X DC comics)
Rating: 3
Author: Baldysalino

BaldysalinoLv131yr

2023-05-05 07:58

The story’s pacing is horible and it feels all over the place. Too many things are happening all at once and the author has no control over it. The idea seems interesting, but not the execution.

I Reap Souls In DC (Bleach X DC comics)

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