ThePotatoKing
I really like the way the author has a gamer for a main character. And the main character uses his knowledge of gaming to try and help himself with his situation. I think Sebastian also liked high school and never realized it until now. I also like how the author uses this ‘purgatory’ place to test the main character with his biggest flaw. It’s an interesting way of picturing purgatory.
It indeed is fun to go back to school days just to meet up with everyone. Back to those days where we get detentioned and have fun in the name detentions. Oh how I wish such a thing to happen. But then again this is kinda interesting. So many twists and turns. I sometimes love such unexpected things to happen 😁but not gun shoots 🥺 was the tripping a lie? Were their friends dead by the gun shots 😶🙊😱
I like the direction we are headed in, I'm strapped in, in case it's over a cliff... side note: I love the creators note quotes/comments. they add a fun element, though.. personally... I think they would be a great start to your chapters... like in an anime when the title screen has a note that applies to the episode but you don't know how.