Betty_Ozemoje
Writing
of reading
38
Read books
You are right đ. I have done a good number of clean up today using pc. Thanks for your suggestions. It' always feels great to get a feedback.
Thanks for the tip mate
Thanks for the tip mate
They introduced themselves during the chat đ
I guess you are reading with pc because everything is fine with phone . I write with my phone directly in the app I will adjust now Thanks for your suggestion I will put it to use đ
I love the narrative techniques of the story and how each characters are being introduced. Intriguing story line and the plot is great as well. Keep it up author
Hmmm, I can smell some dangers for Deyan...
It would be an adventure Iris won't further in a hurry. Let me read some more. I 'm eager to know what happened next.
I love the first person point of view narration you use in this chapter,it makes connecting with the character easy... What Grace wanted was simple put the parents thought the have given her all. Yes they did her their best but never cared to know what she wanted...
Interesting story I must say. How sad can she gets. It's even worse for Grace because she was like the envious of every other kid because she has what people think are most important' famous and rich parents,,, but the sad reality of her life was she wasn't happy...