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Betty_Ozemoje

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  • Betty_Ozemoje
    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
    Replied to Ogunbayo_Ahmed

    Thank you buddy

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  • Betty_Ozemoje
    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
    Commented

    Wait and see ...

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  • Betty_Ozemoje
    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
    Replied to Osegbua_Harry

    Thank you .it is always feels great to get a feedback from my readers . I appreciate your review I will keep putting in my best cheers

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    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
    Replied to McWms99

    You are right 🙌. I have done a good number of clean up today using pc. Thanks for your suggestions. It' always feels great to get a feedback.

    " Let me call Casime, " Ela said reaching into her bag to bring out her phone. When I looked around the party venue, the few people around were all strange to me. I had expected to see a lot of familiar faces since the surposed celebrant was Casime lover who used to be our class mate at the University. Casime and I were never friends and will not consider us as enemies either. We have had a little misunderstanding over a guy in our school days but we managed to move past it. At least so I thought. We never got along much after the fight between us although we gave each other a good front to say hi when ever we saw after then. Casime was one of those busy bodies who always thinks she could outshine any one. She also was known for her multiple relationships. One thing I liked about her was how she could light up a place with her funny stories. She was mostly very happy and we saw her as news carrier. If anything was happening in school, Casime would be the first to know. She usually gave us the latest gist on campus. "I hope we would get along better now that we are no longer in schoo"I swallowed under my breath. It's been three years after graduation and I have not set my eyes on her after our graduation ceremony. If it was not for the expection of seeing my class mate, I wouldn't have gone for the party but now that everything seems weird, I wondered if I have not made a wrong decision. 'Well I needed to take a break from my hunting thought'I tried to console my self. I went over to meet Ela who had been on the phone.
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    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
    Replied to McWms99

    Thanks for the tip mate

    My eyes followed him as the bus moved, but he got smaller until I could no longer see him. I felt a thump' in my heart when I could no longer see him.
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    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
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    Thanks for the tip mate

    My eyes followed him as the bus moved, but he got smaller until I could no longer see him. I felt a thump' in my heart when I could no longer see him.
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    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
    Replied to McWms99

    They introduced themselves during the chat 😃

    "Karl, is that really you?" I muttered looking him in the eyes. "Yes it's me I have long wished for this day my love," he replied back also looking straight into my eyes as if he was trying to get hold of something in there. His words were heart melting to me. I felt my heart missed a beat.
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  • Betty_Ozemoje
    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
    Replied to McWms99

    I guess you are reading with pc because everything is fine with phone . I write with my phone directly in the app I will adjust now Thanks for your suggestion I will put it to use 👍

    " Let me call Casime, " Ela said reaching into her bag to bring out her phone. When I looked around the party venue, the few people around were all strange to me. I had expected to see a lot of familiar faces since the surposed celebrant was Casime lover who used to be our class mate at the University. Casime and I were never friends and will not consider us as enemies either. We have had a little misunderstanding over a guy in our school days but we managed to move past it. At least so I thought. We never got along much after the fight between us although we gave each other a good front to say hi when ever we saw after then. Casime was one of those busy bodies who always thinks she could outshine any one. She also was known for her multiple relationships. One thing I liked about her was how she could light up a place with her funny stories. She was mostly very happy and we saw her as news carrier. If anything was happening in school, Casime would be the first to know. She usually gave us the latest gist on campus. "I hope we would get along better now that we are no longer in schoo"I swallowed under my breath. It's been three years after graduation and I have not set my eyes on her after our graduation ceremony. If it was not for the expection of seeing my class mate, I wouldn't have gone for the party but now that everything seems weird, I wondered if I have not made a wrong decision. 'Well I needed to take a break from my hunting thought'I tried to console my self. I went over to meet Ela who had been on the phone.
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  • Betty_Ozemoje
    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
    Replied to McWms99

    Thanks mate for your honest review . I have taken note of the errors you spotted and I will adjust accordingly. I do appreciate your feedback

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  • Betty_Ozemoje
    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
    Posted

    Wow an awesome write up. The story is quite intriguing and the plot is great too. The themes are not my best kind of story but I love it all the same... That shows how great the story is.

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    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
    Posted

    I love the narrative techniques of the story and how each characters are being introduced. Intriguing story line and the plot is great as well. Keep it up author

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  • Betty_Ozemoje
    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
    Commented

    Hmmm, I can smell some dangers for Deyan...

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  • Betty_Ozemoje
    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
    Commented

    It would be an adventure Iris won't further in a hurry. Let me read some more. I 'm eager to know what happened next.

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  • Betty_Ozemoje
    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
    Replied to Avwerosuo_Hope

    Am glad you like the story Thank you very much I dearly appreciate your feedback

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  • Betty_Ozemoje
    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
    Replied to Osegbua_Harry

    Wait and see how the story unfold

    Ch 27 Breath
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  • Betty_Ozemoje
    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
    Commented

    I love the first person point of view narration you use in this chapter,it makes connecting with the character easy... What Grace wanted was simple put the parents thought the have given her all. Yes they did her their best but never cared to know what she wanted...

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  • Betty_Ozemoje
    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
    Commented

    Interesting story I must say. How sad can she gets. It's even worse for Grace because she was like the envious of every other kid because she has what people think are most important' famous and rich parents,,, but the sad reality of her life was she wasn't happy...

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  • Betty_Ozemoje
    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
    Posted

    I ended up reading more than I bargained for haha... that tells one thing... It was an interesting read. Nice character introduction and narrative flow. Nice work author đŸ’Ș

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    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
    Commented

    I love how the characters were introduced and a bit of romance in the mixt.

    Ch 3 And Then Came the Screams...
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    Betty_Ozemoje1yr
    Replied to ThePotatoKing

    Haha isn't that one of the reasons they say 'love is blind ?

    Ch 2 Meet a Debia
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