Oh? I did sent it in this paragraph comment section tho. Are you still facing an issue?

A very amazing story, full of twists and turns that keeps you rooted in your seats, wanting to know more. I am a light hearted person and still, I can't help but read the novel, even if the main couple is toxic af. The characters are so interesting and very well written. The dialogue is not forced and it feels like the characters are actually alive. I liked the world building, although I don't think the author has fully shown the entire world to us yet. The writing quality is pretty good, with some errors here and there, but nothing too much to bring down the reader's enjoyment. The story development is amazing, the main character went through some crazy shit and I love how he changes during the course of the story so far. To all the new readers, grab on to your seat belts, this is going to be a wild ride. To the Author, thank you so much for this amazing book. Good luck for the future!

I will be providing the link of the novel when I start publishing on the comment section.

HELLOO!!!

A very common trend that I love.

That's a very cursed image.

The story is really interesting and captivating. The writing is good and easy to understand. The story development seems to be well paced. The character designs are alright. The world background is also well written and mysterious. What I have to say is about the writing style. The author had made some grammatical errors in the chapters. For example, I would not see capital letters at the starting of a dialogue or maybe there would not be enough commas and full stops. The author is also rather straightforward with her writing. For example, the author does not explain much in the chapters, like showing us how the characters are feeling and the chapter also lacked some descriptive writing. Not that it bothered me that much, but some readers might like to visualize the whole story. I am writing this review after reading like 6 chapters or so; if the author does correct her mistakes in the later chapters, you all can discard my critic. Other than that, I really think that you should give this story a chance. It is very mysterious and captivating; it will keep you hooked. Author, well done. I wish you best of lucks!

said every horror protagonist.

The writing quality is good, although there are some grammatical errors. There are also a point of view change from one character to another, which really confused me. There are also notes the Author added and just said, 'Says the narrator'. It was a bit confusing for me too and disturbed the flow of the story. The story is very capitating, it was able to keep my attention for the whole 5 chapters published. The character designs are also well done. The world background is interesting and well written. There are only 5 chapters currently, so I cant say anything about the story development, but I can see that it will be good. The pacing seems good and does not bore us. All in all, I think this book is a good read. Looking forward to more.

seems so

Author, did you change the POV of Fond to Norveil?

A really good first chapter. Although it was quite long, I was able to enjoy it.

I am happy to know that you are still going to read it after knowing it is BL. I hope you enjoy! And thank you for your review!

Thank you for the chapter

The writing of the book is really good and very easy to understand. The characters stay true to their personalities as introduced. The world background is well written and very interesting and I want to know more about it. There are only 5 chapters currently, so I can't say anything about the development of the story. The book is paced well and it does not keep us bored. Sara seems to be a really strong woman and I can't wait to see more of her in the later chapters. All in all, well done author! I am looking forward to more!

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I literally have no words to explain how I felt when I read the novel. It is just starting and it is already really good. From chapter 1, it had me hooked. The writing is to die for. The horror and tension could be left and I was left very concerned for the main protagonist. Because I had no idea on how the story might progress and what will happen to him. The story had its mix of horror, thrill and mystery and the book had done justice to those genres. There were also some humorous lines here and three, which helped a bit to calm me down in the tensed situation. The story development also really well paced. The characters are also well designed and well written. They really do seem lifelike. The conversations are well thought out, it was not forced. The world background is really interesting and mysterious. Amazing work Author! I am looking forward to more!

I think the tutorial is trying to make Seb accept that his friends are dead. And the only way to maybe get out of this loop is to re-live and accept the trauma. Since he is denying the death of his classmates, the tutorial is trying to make him mentally stronger. Most likely that after this, we might have another loop were he relives the trauma of his friend's death. Just some thoughts. Also, I really love the hidden story of what might have actually happened to his classmates.

I appreciate the humor during this intense scenario.

Yeah, Seb is slowly loosing his braincells.