brother of a jobless reincarnation (up for adoption)

Im looking forward to this, Ive read a couple of jobless fanfics and theyre generally not that great. I am BEGGING you. Please dont make this a "the girls fall for me for no reason at all" type fic. So many jobless fics start out decent and then go the "Im better then everybody, all the girls love me" route and it drives me nuts

Great story so far, though it doest feel progressive. All I've read is him being weak or not good enough, or just struggling with everything when combined with his talent and hard work he shouldn't be staggering.( I think you mean stagnating.)Maybe lack of inspiration. He has a great teacher, talent is hardworking, and has arguably one of the strongest weapons in fate and the most holy sword, Excaliber. Just imagine what he can do if he can unseal it and get rid of the 13 seals holding excaliber back. my point is he should have been a genius of the sword while his brother a genius of magic but you've described him as having less talent in the sword then rudeus in magic. I get its going to be a slow fic and you don't want make him unnecessarily op to quickly, but don't down play him and make him look weak with every encounter or fight he has.

the love interest is gislaine and author make so other girls fall in love with rudeus even when mc interact with them too. with this alone you can see this is the type of fic where author is forcing the plot for them to love rudeus. anyone that read the novel know that a girl will never fall in love normally with rudeus, forget about how creepy perfect he is but his inferioty complex is massive. so if this was realistically writen I never see a girl choosing rudeus over the mc.