Cynical_Stranger
8 is quite a unique name. I don't know if it was pun intended, but the 8 really looks like an infinity sign when placed horizontally. Him being an immortal, I hope he does get stronger and doesn't easily get into danger/captured like in first few paragraphs. I personally like bucket head. His description was a hilarious one. When you realize your saviour isn't really s knight in shining armour but a knight in bucket head description (read to find out 🤣) I hope the clause of sentence breaking could be addressed, this way readers don't get too confused. As too much are going on in one paragraph. All in all it was a good read!
Okay let me base off my review from the way I rated this work. The story development and writing quality is good but the character description is almost non existent, I have nothing to use and imagine what I'm reading. Updates look pretty slow and world background... well there isn't much to work with so yeah.. Looking forward to more chappies.
The quality of the author's writing is uniquely perfect! Some of the descriptions in the two chapters are so vivid that I could picture each scene with a lot of clarity. The concept is intriguing as well, but I would caution anyone who is faint of heart because it's very descriptive (gory, or is that not the correct word for it?). Overall, I can't wait for the next update.
With only one chapter posted, not much can be said. Descriptions are pretty good, and the opening chapter does a good job of somewhat explaining the plot and motivations. The possibility available for gallows humour is strong here. Only complaint is that there aren't enough chapters to make a true judgement yet at time of writing.
…I like it. I like what’s happening so far. I enjoy these kinds of genres, but unfortunately, they aren’t as famous as the others. Everything was sooo descriptive, and it was easy for me to imagine the scenes. One small reminder though - I think in the first chapter, the POV changes midway? It was the believer, but then it changed. I don’t mind multiple POVs, but it would be nice if you could somehow notice readers. The pace and storyline are already good as it is. Keep up the good work 😊
Not perfect but interesting so far. Curious to read more. I like the "broken fantasy world apocalypse" concept, its refreshing. The antagonists seems a bit generic but I do love corpse and how he is a great lawbringer in the hierarchy because he dosen't feel pain or need to give it to others. Fighting him won't give a sadist or a masochist any pleasure. There is some missing "," here and there. And the humor is hit and miss. The use of the weird physics branding places is creative and fun so far. I like the good old times tavern in particular.
First of all, I love the cover. It’s very simple yet catchy. Okay, let’s move on to the story. I. FREAKIN’. LOVE. THIS!! I love reading comedy, action, violence with a tinge of psychological elements to it. And they’re all in one novel!! The way the author designed each of his characters, their personalities, their traits… It’s phenomenal! They’re not confusing at all! I would say that they’re all unique in their own masochistic ways. I laughed so hard, especially on the second chap. Though I wish each chap is not too long. Though I would have given 5 stars if not for the fact that the update is so slow.
hello. I'm not a fan of action actually, but I'll try my best to give you a review of what I read from your book. your writing quality is quite good as you always try to correct me, and thank you. the story development is also good so I give you 5 stars. for character design here I talk about the cover. the font is not quite clear so maybe you can try another font or maybe change the cover? it is up to you. and please update regularly because your readers may wait for you. don't take it too seriously, because I just want to be honest about my perspective to you. well done, author. keep on writing and bless you! ^_^
The starting is a bit weird, but storytelling is top tier. One thing I gotta mention is when the story is in 1st person POV, it's too good, the description, the monologue are totally amazing. But when it sometimes comes to 3rd person POV, the motion stumbles, description gets confusing. The comedy and action is well balanced. Last but not the least, the upload speed seems a bit slow. Overall it's going very well, keep it up.
This is a very interesting story, I was hooked in the first chapter right away. The description in the story is immaculate, at times, and I enjoy the paradox that is created. However I do feel some parts need more description even though mystery seems to be rearing its head. Either way its good and I can't wait to read more.