…I like it. I like what’s happening so far. I enjoy these kinds of genres, but unfortunately, they aren’t as famous as the others. Everything was sooo descriptive, and it was easy for me to imagine the scenes. One small reminder though - I think in the first chapter, the POV changes midway? It was the believer, but then it changed. I don’t mind multiple POVs, but it would be nice if you could somehow notice readers. The pace and storyline are already good as it is. Keep up the good work 😊
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