pblazarus
This is amazing. Truly brilliant, with the perfect amount of imagination and creativity required to write a fantasy novel with elves and fairies. The writing is impressive and each character holds a certain level of relatability with the reader. The plot is really intriguing and every scene is so well-written, you can't help reading more. Overall, really awesome.
Overall : the story was great and captivating! The story was all well thought of and planned out by the author, they know where they would want to take the story as it progresses! Writing quality : it was good and there wasn’t any grammar mistakes so it’s great! Updating : its stable and consistent with its updates! Characters : I was intrigued by the characters that seemed interesting and unique! They each have their own personalities and traits that have been written out well by the author which makes it easier to visualise how the character would be/look like. World background : the world background was interesting which brings out the adventure feels to the story. My thought : This story is definitely one of a kind and I would really recommend it to be read! I really want to see where this story of adventures would bring me, good job to the author and hope you keep writing!! Don’t give up! ✨
Its not your typical isekai book coz of the unique plot. i am intrigued what happen in chapters 10 onward cozi haven’t read it yet. but by judging it so far , the world building was amazing. i had a feeling all ideas was set in place before you write this book. i was totally immerse. there’s some minor grammatical error but it was unnoticeable .
Okay, so overall, I feel like this is a great novel. The writing quality is superb, though there might be some places which can have use a more coherent style, and others where some words are repetitive (try using synonyms), but other than that, the english is excellent and the writing is very understandable. judging by the dates when the novel was released, i have nothing to say other than that your consistency is amazing! okay next is story development, and to be honest, even though it's a tiny tiny bit cliche (which is good), it has many unique parts to it, like how when he was transported he wasnt the only one. World background and character design are also good, but i would have giving them 4.5/5 rather than 5 if i could. i cant give 4 because its better than 4 though. good luck, im interested in how this will progress