by the way I'm rlly loving the novel thanks for offering this masterpiece for free

no thats not what I mean, I'm not blabbering on it being reductive or whatever just that idk what it means bc I rlly don't understand.. it let me think of anything with the way u describe it it's like saying 'it was a yellow day' like ok I guess the day was yellow but what does that tell me? but like I said before maybe I misunderstood and u mean to say 'face'rather than physique? perhaps that would make sense bc if u say American physique I might think fat so that is obvious, but for others like 'african ' or 'middle Eastern' I can't think of physiques associated with those 😅

I have a feeling he'll cheat his way through life to become at the top. that would be interesting

I've been wondering tho but what do 'middle Eastern physique' or 'african physique' etc mean?? is that just their face or their body structure, if it'd the first then the wording is a little off it gets me confused

I agree but tbh I think it might make the author lazy with a intricate plot (where things can just be excused as luck lol)

I'm very late but like the other person said, since the comma isn't placed correctly, it is hard to tell, but im 101% sure it means that the 'mystical' place is so grand it cannot compare to something (so small in comparison) like the pyramids

i think i read somewhere u like grammar checks, so uh. this is 6 months old, yes. it is a tiny tiny error, yes. but 'hers' can never have an apostrophe (her'is) - otherwise your saying '..was somehow even more disturbing that her is' (which doesn't make sense)! Remember that for the future!

it's like those stories where someone gets reincarnated from earth and tries implement earth's technology. it just feels good to have something from 'home'

hmm or maybe the actual game is loading a REAL World ... 😳

its a small plothole which probably won't be solved, but i think the story wont be set in other countries in that case? if the author actually manages to find a solution to this without limiting the setting i will be surprised

lool your right, before i edited it i think it said 3rd or something and i forgot, thanks for giving me a heads up! When i release the next chapter I'll also edit this paragraph

big deep yees

I'm glad you see it that way! Also, fur future reference, what part of the dialogues weren't as good as it could have been? Was it the style or the emotions(or lack thereof) evoked, or is it something else? Thanks for the review :)

bc of how long he lived, obviously he's not human anymore. It turns out the during that process he evolved to another being (think of it as a 'higher human'.) As the novel progresses, higher stages = higher level cap, higher age limit, etc..

Thank you!!

Thank you for the review, I'm glad you described the novel in such a positive way! I've read parts of your one, which is also superb!

woahhhh, chill there author, this is wayy too good haha okay for real though, the description is literally so intricate and vivid! I literally never thought that writing in present 3rd person can show a scene so amazingly. the pace is nice too, it seems slow so assume the novel will be long? i might read this sometime again when theres more chapters lol ,since i wont be able to handle the suspense!! good luck with this !

Okay, so overall, I feel like this is a great novel. The writing quality is superb, though there might be some places which can have use a more coherent style, and others where some words are repetitive (try using synonyms), but other than that, the english is excellent and the writing is very understandable. judging by the dates when the novel was released, i have nothing to say other than that your consistency is amazing! okay next is story development, and to be honest, even though it's a tiny tiny bit cliche (which is good), it has many unique parts to it, like how when he was transported he wasnt the only one. World background and character design are also good, but i would have giving them 4.5/5 rather than 5 if i could. i cant give 4 because its better than 4 though. good luck, im interested in how this will progress

bruh i just realised that this was written months ago, idk you maybe dropped the work but if you still use this site then you can read this nonetheless

on second thought, ima rate it. okay heres a copy of the comment a wrote bc cba to rewrite lol: 'In all honesty, I'm really really surprised this has no comments, despite the many views. Are the people reading this just too stupid to understand the words? Lol, anyways, the language is extremely articulate, and your writing style is really nice (in my opinion). Also, the stem of the story is very promising and seems to be able to develop to multiple different scenario's/decisions. I look forward to how you go with this, though, since this is only the first chapter, and I can't tell whether stability of updates will be good (and the story development too), Ive given them 4 stars. I think this is more suitable. Good luck with this.'