Comments of chapter undefined of Mason Aves: The Wizard(Kinda Complete.. again)

This whole situation happened out of nowhere and it kind of feels like you're forcing a narrative, especially with the MCU that usually the stolen blood=clone or super serum

this is disappointing chapter

Trash, if you can’t write dark then why try? It obviously didn’t work our very well all you’re doing is nerfing a already nerfed character

Dear autor. Darker elements help story to not become monotone. It is nice break, but I can't feel this right. How MC was caught by ordinary people? With his skill sets it is hart to eat this information. It will be easier if you mentioned something about his pride and how he felt strong and safe but it was his downfall.

This isn’t Even “Dark” whatsoever… Just a sudden Random Event that made the MC somehow Useless…

I don't understand. He was suposed te be able to stop buletts with his mind but couldn't protect his head and got knocked out? Nerf they del dn't do anything special to capture him just pure luck? BS

Tbh I don’t usually like stuff like this but I’m actually ok with it and you made it quite interesting. You portrayed smicth lovely by the way. I’m just wondering how you’ll make him be able to get out of this situation in a logical way bc he totally fûcked from the looks of it. I also hope this teaches mc some realisation that he is in a MARVEL world with some Harry Potter ad not the other way around.

this is disappointing i think he can have atleast a portkey for him in case he become unconscious

well the fact that u can't and don't seem to like writing "dark" situations means u won't unnecessarily extend this part of the story, some authors tens to do that in order to "build" tension n drama...it usually doesn't work out well 4 them cheers Author-san

sigh... you know what i think i'm just gonna skip a few of the chapter or maybe until modern day arc

okay bye. this is ridiculous.

Can't he just called His house elf to get him out of there to recover and then take revenge?

Thanks for the chapter

This novel power balance : Martial arts > Grenade > Sorcery > Magic > Knife > Old God/Demon > Sorcerer supreme > Common people. This make no freacking sense. I guess making multiple universe come together is hard, but if u can't have a proper power chart, give up the multiverse...

Can u you write a story with indian super hero in marvel you can start in India debut as first super hero in india you can add other supers from india to .

huh! Well I liked the chapter, Mason was taking everything for granted anyways. Good job man

liked the chapter and I really think you should have more confidence in your writing author. now correct me if I'm wrong was it in this fic that existed a ritual that erased every bit of blood outside of the wizards body? and also when did Mason get this personal dimension?

I liked the chapter though, I hope this experience drives him to get stronger

Wow people are hating this chapter, I enjoyed it.

I'm embarrassed I actually said "Yes!" out loud when I saw there was a new chapter.